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Re: O dear Hotels, stop being ironic!
Please! This is just too true! They promise all these nice things and end up bringing the opposite.I like hotels because they bring off the feeling of being on vacation.I ...
Jun 10, 2022 -
Re: Make Me
Whatever happened to their love? What tragic twist crept towards them? How could this be? That is for us readers to interpret.I think that this makes sense.It’s about wanting to ...
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Re: deep breathing exercises
And you are always beautiful like the cracked and colorless photo of a 1950’s dame.Old,timeless and everlasting.Sorry I just wanted to add to the prose.I can imagine this as either ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: Wooden Comb
And I wonder if a girl with long golden hair overlooking a mirror lake ever used that comb.Maybe she had porcelain dolls.Maybe the girl dreamed with her comb.Who knew? That ...
Jun 7, 2022 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Ah the fear of exploring and finding yourself.The fear of really letting who you are come into place.Drowning in your sorrow and consumes and destroys takes over you.It’s unescapable.It’s everywhe
Jun 6, 2022 -
Re: Lora and Julia
I like this story because it reminds me of something I would write.Hey,maybe if you want to,I could pick one of my characters to meet one of the characters in ...
Jun 5, 2022 -
Re: so much for my happy ending
Well that was dark.I think it’s about someone who just can’t take the bullying anymore and just snaps.It’s too late to apologize now.The gun is already pointed and filled.The hate ...
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Re: The Little Cow and the Great Titan
Those who suffer punishments from the Gods are stronger than them.Because they take risks.Because they dare.Even with the many consequences they still try.I don’t really like Zeus either.I find him ...
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Re: Book Stabber!!
A friend who has destroyed your collection of books is no friend.Especially after sending it off to space.This story made cry and question the meaning of made me look behind ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: I will not be Bad
I don’t see how writing on a board can stop someone from being bad.But that’s what teachers did.It’s what people have thought to do.A kid is going to misbehave.They are ...
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Re: Night time Fears
Often at night things seem scarier.It’s like the world is out to get reality it’s all in your head.But we can’t help it when we imagine these things.It’s night so ...
May 31, 2022 -
Re: Prologue: A done deal
Oh! I take it that the girls are going to be born into toxic families.How did they die? Someone must have pushed them in water.I’m guessing that they are high ...
May 30, 2022 -
Re: An Ode to Liberty
We should fight for liberty.It’s one of the most important brings security and order among society.Something everyone wants and deserves.Yet something so hard to obtain.It’s the thing that is just
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Re: Instructions for Visiting the Tree Café
The tree cafe seems like a magical place to be.Who wouldn’t want to go there? I would love to be in that environment.I think fairies dine wouldn’t be a big ...
May 27, 2022 -
Re: Soil of misery
Who knows? Even families can spread lies and abandon.You’ll be left wondering if anyone was ever there.But it’s important that you can still shine no matter what.Not for anyone but ...
May 26, 2022
