It's such a sweet poem. And it's so true. Appreciate the similarity and comparison between love and materialistic treasures. Many people want money, and they are willing to sacrifice so many things for it. Sometimes people even hoard love in their hearts and do not give it away so easily. but simple acts of kindness are enough to free this emotion. The satisfaction that one gets when one loves or is loved, is more wholesome than all the gold in the world.
The poem was easy to follow but towards the end it became a bit confusing. I agree with Alliyah that you could have used a different word choice there. And yes, I think you meant to use "than" instead of "then" in the last stanza. Overall, it's a good poem.
Cheers
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