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Re: the fear
Hello there, Flux. I'm Rose, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. :) Overall, this is an amazing piece. It's brief and relatively simple compared to some ...
Dec 2, 2012 -
Re: Thankful
Hey there, Chances! You left a review request on my wall, so I'm here to take you up on it. :D First off, welcome to YWS! I hope that you ...
Dec 1, 2012 -
Re: Seeing Distance
Hello. I'm Rose, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. This is an extremely interesting piece. When I finished reading it, I leaned back from my laptop, ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: The Result of Random Thoughts
Hey. I'm Rosie, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. Before I go any further, I should probably point out that I'm not in the best of ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: He'll be my Last First Kiss
Hello there, Butterfly! I'm Rosie, and I'm here to share my thoughts on this piece. :) Overall, this is a cute piece. Almost a little bit too cute for me, ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: The red dress
Hello there, Dream! My name's Rosie, and I'm here to share my thoughts about this piece. :) Initially, I wasn't sure what this piece was because of how you'd organized ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: Holly
Hello there again! Sorry for taking so long to take you up on your review request. But here I am now. :) Overall, this is a cute piece. There were ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re:
Hello there! My name's Rosie, and I'm here to review this piece. :) My favorite part about this piece is the personality that your writing style lent to it. You ...
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: (Untitled) Part 1
Hello there, Kitty! You posted a review request on my wall a few days ago, so I'm here to follow through on it. I'm sorry that it took so long ...
Nov 23, 2012 -
Re: Flakes
Hello, Imagine! I'm Rosie, and I'm here to review this piece. :) First, I'd like to discuss the concept of this piece. By describing the dissolution of yourself in the ...
Oct 2, 2012 -
Re: waiting on those words to come
Hey, Walker! Rosie here! :) This is an awesome piece, but that doesn't surprise me. I always enjoy reading what you've written. One particular stanza stands out to me: "it’s ...
Oct 2, 2012 -
Re: One in a Million
Hello there, Jedi! My name's Rosie, and I'm here to review this piece. :) First off, welcome to YWS! I love it here; the experience and critique I've gained since ...
Oct 2, 2012 -
Re: SICK
Hello, Scarlett! I'm Rosie, and I'm here to review this piece. :) First off, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do! There ...
Aug 22, 2012 -
Re: idk
This is awesome. It isn't absolutely perfect concerning punctuation as some of the other reviewers have pointed out, but I quite like it the way it is. The lack of ...
Jul 19, 2012 -
Re: wooden walls
Hello there, Living! My name's Rosie, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. :) First off, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I ...
Jul 8, 2012
