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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Too Blind Too See

    errors errors errors. hey matt, this made me grunt. it lacked anything fresh, which you should offer to the audience in the first place. that's the first problems. secondly, it's ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: I.G.S : Cartel : chapter 1

    ugh. i didn't like this. it lacked actual juicy content to interest the readers. first of all, it is incredibly hard to read. there is lack of capitalization, more capitalization ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Those Three Words

    this is okay. okay, i didn't really find this funny. you could see the ending a mile away. the "netflix and chill" joke is basically a dead horse, and this ...

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yes I Am

    I wasn't a big fan of this. The delivery and subject matter is nothing new. It lacks originality and something that makes the audience interested. We get it, you're different, ...

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Jelly stuff! Careful, it bites! (3)

    What. Once again, this was random in a pretty bad way. I request that you understand that random does not equal funny. Random equals something uninteresting and quite embarrassing. Probably ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Guilt <3

    A few plot holes. I wasn't a big fan of this. A question I must ask is did they get drugged? What was the exact drug they used? This didn't ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: A Letter From Hell

    Illogical. I wasn't a fan of this for the following reasons; not that creative. Creativity is usually what poetry boils down to and this, in a sense, brought something I've ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Literature Re: My Own Way!

    I didn't like this. I see you labeled this as humor, but it lacks actual humor. This was just random and being random doesn't make you funny. This lacked real ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Do you know what youre saying?

    This was rather mean. I personally wasn't a fan and I do not mean to insult you in this poem. I didn't like how rude and disrespectful it was. They ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: Welcome to America

    This isn't a debate. I get that the U.S has problems, but it's the stance that you take that damages the potential that this poem has. In a sense, this ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Culture Gone Wrong

    You sure know better than all of us. Hey. Drop here. Not a fan of this. This makes it out like you are disgusted with our culture, yes? Well, we ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Martin

    I don't understand the point of this. This was very simple, very general, very generic, and just didn't work. Possibly for other readers, sure, but not for me. What I ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Lingering

    This was sweet. I'm not going to lie, this really tugged my heart because of how cute it was. It's a sweet romance poem that hits it mark in wanting ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No One. (I edited the old poem but I think I like the original better)

    I've read this before. This brought absolutely nothing new to the table. I enjoyed it, yes, but it brought me the same poem that I often get when I scroll ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: An Explanation of DeviantArt

    One trick pony right here. Hey. Drop here. I get the joke, it made me chuckle, but overall the poem wasn't effective. This appeals to such a small audience that ...

    Sep 27, 2015


The things you are passionate about are not random, they are your calling.
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