"You have one message" the computer will say.
I get scared as this one is a spam.
"A new invention will make you fly in your own way!".
I delete it with a BAM.
Only to see a pumpkin fly!
"It ain't thanksgiving nor Halloween!"
I can't believe what I have just seen!
Then another pumpkin flew by.
And a something else blew.
It was an orange.
Nothing rhymes with orange.
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Hello there!
To be totally honest, I don't understand what the idea is behind this. As others have mentioned, it's completely random. I find it difficult to be amused, when there seems only to be random phrases. For me, it's just extremely confusing. But your last two lines did kind of remind me of humorous poetry (or sarcastic poetry? Meh). But either way, keep on writing, and good job! (Forgot to make this a review, sorry x.x)
Thanks! I will make my next poem make sense.
Make more sense*
Hello there!
To be totally honest, I don't understand what the idea is behind this. As others have mentioned, it's completely random. I find it difficult to be amused, when there seems only to be random phrases. For me, it's just extremely confusing. But your last two lines did kind of remind me of humorous poetry (or sarcastic poetry? Meh). But either way, keep on writing, and good job!
I didn't like this.
I see you labeled this as humor, but it lacks actual humor. This was just random and being random doesn't make you funny. This lacked real creativeness and was, in a sense, a true waste of 200 points. When you write humor poetry, you have to aim to make the audience laugh. By saying random things just to say random things, it lacks all creativity. This wasn't a work at all. It's just nonsensical ramblings that serve no importance.
thanks.
Honestly, it is a bit too... uncoordinated. I am a big fan of different styles of writing, especially writing like this, but it is just too much.
but you do not have a close quotation. Your last two lines are great.Also, you state
Your line is bad... I can't think of anything, but it is not necessary.
YOU CAN GO YOUR OWN WAY
YEA!
I was Not expecting this...
well someone had to say it.
Yea.
Um, I'm not sure exactly what your trying to say with this piece. And the
"It ain't thanks nor Halloween!"
confuses me. Are you referencing Thanksgiving? The whole ending confuses me, since it really has no real meaning. The whole poem seems to ramble and talk about nothing, so some clarification might help me and others understand what your trying to say. It's a nice twist on words, but obviously makes no sense. Maybe have a bette lead into the ending? Other than that, have a great night, and keep writing!
I made it make no sense in purpose, anyway, thanks for the review!
hhehe, okay! Welcome!
Um, I'm not sure exactly what your trying to say with this piece. And the
"It ain't thanks nor Halloween!"
confuses me. Are you referencing Thanksgiving? The whole ending confuses me, since it really has no real meaning. The whole poem seems to ramble and talk about nothing, so some clarification might help me and others understand what your trying to say. It's a nice twist on words, but obviously makes no sense. Maybe have a bette lead into the ending? Other than that, have a great night, and keep writing!