copgraveyard

satire. i wasn't a fan of this for a few reasons, the biggest one being that you ditched all elements of an actual poem to beat your message across the ...

wasnt keen on this. hi. the thing i didnt like the most on this was the format you had. without punctuation it becomes incredibly flustered and confusing to read. in ...

i personally wasnt the fan of this. i understand that you were aiming for something deep and poetic that resembles fear but the delivery tainted that. you use long sentences ...

i am openly underwhelmed. this is a simple poem and that's not a good thing. you cover a topic that's a dead horse, you're beating it with a baseball bat. ...

this lacks variety. this covers a topic that has been beaten to death on this website. it becomes redundant and not fun to read. the last two lines in your ...

i honestly don't understand the point of this. i get that this is a parody, but it wasn't a solid one at all. it looks like your main approach of ...

hi. i wasn't a fan of this. you didn't bring anything new to corruption, and, well, it came off as silly. you talk about corruption and you use big words ...

i don't get this. this brought no emotional catharsis to me. this is generic and beaten to a bloody pulp. you talk about the girl who fake smiles, who has ...

this is actually decent. even though you don't bring anything new or refreshing in the poem, you manage to step around all the obvious sayings and instead, bring something original ...

this is tough to read. i struggled while reading this. this wasn't enjoyable. a key tip you need to keep in mind while writing is don't have multiple characters speak ...

this is okay. this has some good and bad things. you use a lot of faux poetics that turns off the reader, and too many one liners to make it ...

i didn't like this. this made no grammatical sense at all. sure you portrayed the loneliness feeling but it made no sense. what you need to do is have it ...

what is this hi, hikaru. i don't like this work at all. you just posted a 404'd link. how is this supposed to draw in readers? post something that works ...

i wasn't a fan of this. hey rectangles, i didn't understand the purpose of this poem. there is no evident humor value within it, to be perfectly honest. "hey guys ...

pain and poetry only goes well together thinking about it, not writing it. hey scar, i wasn't a fan of this poem. i found no real substance in this poem. ...