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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My Human

    Not gonna lie, I thought this was gonna be about Doctor Who when I first read the title. XD Hey, ash! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this fine Review ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: For all that we do...

    Hey there, EscapeToNeverland! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this fine Review Day! Hmm, I think I can definitely tell that these are supposed to be separate poems. I think ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Prayer Labyrinth

    Hey, Codayy! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this lovely Review Day! Ah, Shakespearean sonnets. They come across as so effortless when you read them, but dang, that iambic pentameter ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: Living

    Hey there, LucytheBrave! cleverclogs here representing Team Batman on this fine Review Day! Let's get all the technical stuff out of the way first, shall we? First of all, this ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Timegirl: Chapter One

    Hello, Timegirl! cleverclogs here to review! I'm a major fan of Doctor Who, as you can probably tell from my avvie. I read a lot (I mean a LOT) of ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Rose Petals

    Hey there, Sarah12! clogs here to review! So overall this is a pretty nice poem. I think it could be improved in some areas, though. I think that the imagery ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Thyroid Pills

    Hey there, keepwriting! clogs here for a review! This poem was... okay, I guess? Like it wasn't bad, but it didn't really have anything interesting. It's kind of bland, really. ...

    Mar 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: The Drug

    Hey there Canvas! cleverclogs here to review! This was a pretty good poem. I enjoyed how you juxtaposed the good and the bad in the relationship, using different metaphors each ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Star-Crossed Lovers

    Hey there, MadWriter7! clogs here to review! I liked the starry imagery in this poem. It was a nice theme, and you kept it up throughout the poem without it ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: Love Wins

    Hey there, null25! cleverclogs here to review! Let's begin, shall we? When I saw this poem, I was really excited, because yay! Pride! I'm a member of the LGBT community, ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: such beautiful flowers

    ello, cello! clogs here to review! since we haven't chatted in a while and I'm missing you Okay, this was really good. A few suggestions: 1. I sensed that the ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: (2-Part Poem: I. In All Likeliness II. In A Movie)

    Hello, TaylorAllen! cleverclogs here to review as requested! These are nice poems here. I especially like the first, since I can relate to wondering about random people and their lives ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: A Dream About A Girl

    Hello, TheDreamWriter! cleverclogs here to review! I'll start by getting the typos out of the way. It was truely a great time. The correct spelling is "truly". She had red/brown ...

    Nov 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yes I Am

    Hi, Rainbow! cleverclogs here for a review! Quick grammar thing before I start: There should be a comma after every instance of "yes". Being part of the LGBT community, I'm ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Great Wilderness

    Hi there, felistia! cleverclogs here to review! I think that there are many things in this poem that are totally solid. The imagery is good. The rhymes aren't forced. The ...

    Nov 1, 2015


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