chasingstars

A true story put into a poem.. that's how it is to me.. the emotions you put into it made it a beautiful poem..

i like your first stanza :)

I must commend you for your vivid imagination, you manage to make me imagine the scenes you were writing and feeling as if I was there. I just hope for ...

the poem is simple yet i find it nice the message is true but we seldom acknowledge. keep on writing and rhyming

very nice poem.. it could mean so many things to so many people.. as for me. i see it as if each of us could be the king in the ...

nice poem .. just confused with these lines I try to cry for just a moment, but the tears have already fallen." i wonder what was ur story behind the ...

great talent in poetry.. the subject feels dark though.. hope to read other poetry of yours with lighter subject :)

nice poem

very nice message and definitely true.. keep writing

nice poetry and rhymes.. i like the poem and its deep message.. an expert work i guess.. keep up the nice poetry in you..

Good job.. I enjoyed reading this.. :)

Your were consistent with what you want to relay to your readers. She was hated by all, But never knew why. Most of the time, She wanted to cry. is ...

yes it was about my cousin, left too young.. she has three lovely children

nice playing with words, though i am confused to what it wants to convey. just keep posting.. keep that your poetic side alive..

nice work.. short and simple.. clear and concise.. keep up the good work