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*claps* Great job on this! I was kind of creeped out at the end because the mother killed herself because of a condition. I love how in the last paragraph ...

1. I love dystopian stories! 2. Love this idea. You followed the rules of a dystopian story. You made sure the community was some how messed up and there was ...

Well this was romantic. ;) This was pretty good but it was too short! I want to know more about what happens after. However there were no spelling or grammar ...

Oh god dear there is a lot I have to say. First, DO NOT USE BOLD THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE THING. It just makes people want to close it ands go ...

Great job on this! I shall start my review with compliments! First off I love it and its a great idea! Second, the best thing about this is the details. ...

Love this, love this, love this!!!! Made me cry and left a good impression. Just want to ask, do you wish to be a boy in real life or was ...

Hello fellow writer! It is time for me to review. First off one tiny thing, when you wrote, " I set down my teacup and started towards the door." You ...

Great story! First off, I love this idea it's awesome! Second of all I love stories like this, it draws me in and makes me want to read more. That's ...

Hello, I believe this is a very good story but has a few mistakes. I love the cliffhanger you made at the end. Cliffhangers are always good in novels and ...

Oh I'm crying right now because of the epilogue. *wipes tear* This was just so amazing! You're obviously a wonderful writer. :) Also like @manisha said the classes at the ...

I loved this every minute! Made me laugh when you mentioned about the cat lady. Also I love the idea of writing a letter about two old people who always ...

*claps hands loudly* Oh my this was so great I just my cry. I loved every paragraph and well the whole thing! Every time it said "boom" or something I'm ...

Wow! Amazing job! *claps hands* This was just so amazing and I don't even have anything to correct! It was so..I don't even have words. I love the rhyming and ...

This was a great poem and had a lot of feeling in it. I'm not really good at poems so this to me is amazing. I can tell what the ...

Hi, This is not really a poem. It has no stanzas or metaphors or any kind of figurative language. It is simply a sentence. However it is a sentence that ...