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Re: Out in the Cold
Hiya Catcha01 here with a review! I love these lyrics personally. They speak a lot and have a really in depth meaning to them. (I prefer songs like that) It's ...
Mar 22, 2014 - Re: One single human emotion Mar 21, 2014
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Re: You Are In Love With An Idiot
Hi Catcha01 here with a review and first off I absolutely LOVE this poem. I related to this poem so well. I've been in an unrequited love you could call ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Memories.
Hi Catcha01 with a review here! Alright first things first, I like the idea that you centered the poem arounds. Its very sweet and down to Earth. Its also cute ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: The first time I forgave.
Welcome to YWS by the way. Now to the reviewing portion of this message: You captured the image of what a person feeling suicidal would. Though sad there was a ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: This is funny!!!
Hiya Catcha01 here with a review ^^ Interesting... It's a funny poem and shows that writing doesn't always have to be structured. I see the rhyme scheme that you have ...
Mar 19, 2014 -
Re: Speak
This is a very interesting poem. It's deep and thoughtful, but yet revealing. I had enjoyed reading it and could feel your feelings as they were clearly represented. I don't ...
Feb 5, 2014 -
Re: First Love
Hi Dreamy this is truly emotional and really beautiful. I think that it is so sweet and really romantic. The way you expressed feeling of happiness,sadness,and confusion really explain to ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Innocence
Hi Dreamy great poem! The feeling you up into writing t can be felt through the reader and the thoughts you were trying to convey were very understandable. This poem ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
Hi jcha92, I am here to review your awesome poem "I am 21" It was a really captivating poem. I like how you focused the whole piece around the character's ...
Jun 12, 2013 -
Re: Group Work
Hey Willowcutz, Catcha01 with a review. I really like this poem. It's a perfect representation of the product of bossy and self-centered group leaders. The dialogue you chose was very ...
Jun 12, 2013 -
Re: hunter
Heeeyyy Razcoon, Great set of lyrics. I was reading them in rhythm, trying to get a beat going. This would be awesome with a awesome music. The lyrics were truly ...
Jun 12, 2013 -
Re: Look At Yourself
This is a wonderful poem. I think that it really connects with most girls. Honestly I don't think that I have any corrections. The poem flowed well, and was enjoyable ...
May 12, 2013 -
Re: Hope
Hello Snoweary, I really love reading your poems. There aren't many thing grammatically wrong with the poem. 1. You have "there she hide" i think that it should be hides, ...
May 12, 2013 -
Re: Teenage Love
Hello again Snoweary, I like this poem, it's very relateable to many people, so let's begin reviewing. 1. For the last stanza on the last line instead of using the ...
May 12, 2013
