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  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Out in the Cold

    Hiya Catcha01 here with a review! I love these lyrics personally. They speak a lot and have a really in depth meaning to them. (I prefer songs like that) It's ...

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: One single human emotion

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: You Are In Love With An Idiot

    Hi Catcha01 here with a review and first off I absolutely LOVE this poem. I related to this poem so well. I've been in an unrequited love you could call ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Memories.

    Hi Catcha01 with a review here! Alright first things first, I like the idea that you centered the poem arounds. Its very sweet and down to Earth. Its also cute ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: The first time I forgave.

    Welcome to YWS by the way. Now to the reviewing portion of this message: You captured the image of what a person feeling suicidal would. Though sad there was a ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: This is funny!!!

    Hiya Catcha01 here with a review ^^ Interesting... It's a funny poem and shows that writing doesn't always have to be structured. I see the rhyme scheme that you have ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Speak

    This is a very interesting poem. It's deep and thoughtful, but yet revealing. I had enjoyed reading it and could feel your feelings as they were clearly represented. I don't ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: First Love

    Hi Dreamy this is truly emotional and really beautiful. I think that it is so sweet and really romantic. The way you expressed feeling of happiness,sadness,and confusion really explain to ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Innocence

    Hi Dreamy great poem! The feeling you up into writing t can be felt through the reader and the thoughts you were trying to convey were very understandable. This poem ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am 21

    Hi jcha92, I am here to review your awesome poem "I am 21" It was a really captivating poem. I like how you focused the whole piece around the character's ...

    Jun 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Group Work

    Hey Willowcutz, Catcha01 with a review. I really like this poem. It's a perfect representation of the product of bossy and self-centered group leaders. The dialogue you chose was very ...

    Jun 12, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: hunter

    Heeeyyy Razcoon, Great set of lyrics. I was reading them in rhythm, trying to get a beat going. This would be awesome with a awesome music. The lyrics were truly ...

    Jun 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Look At Yourself

    This is a wonderful poem. I think that it really connects with most girls. Honestly I don't think that I have any corrections. The poem flowed well, and was enjoyable ...

    May 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hope

    Hello Snoweary, I really love reading your poems. There aren't many thing grammatically wrong with the poem. 1. You have "there she hide" i think that it should be hides, ...

    May 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Teenage Love

    Hello again Snoweary, I like this poem, it's very relateable to many people, so let's begin reviewing. 1. For the last stanza on the last line instead of using the ...

    May 12, 2013


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