captainearth

Hey, @Queenie 1st off this is great short poetry and a great message in my experience with poetry sometimes short is better than long. I like how you put it ...

Hello, Captainearth here for a review. Ok to start off with, great job it's really hard to make a poetry this long and so concise, I like what the story ...

Hello, Bluue I'm here for a quick review. Ok to start off with this is a great story and very sad one at that, the question I ask is if ...

this was a good story, the story itself was interesting of how the story progressed and became more transparent about how the people in the story, the relationship became. Quick ...

This is nice simple poetry, in my opinion the best kind of poetry, but yes ive have seen more creative but still a lovely story. the mistake i saw was ...

This is good concept, i didn't find any punctuation mistakes iv never been good at editing. In story the concept of how we use up so much time on point ...

hm this is every confusing its one big typo not to be mean or anything, but it is okay Poetry this needs a lot of work in editing i,m not ...

this is a good read so far but i,m confused no what going no in the story it fells like you jump in the middle of the story is this ...

This is the kind of poem that makes one wonder, and what you've got here Fancy Dragon is one of them poems that makes a person wonder, and it's accomplished ...

This is one of the best lyrics that I've ever read in my whole life! I think I understand all the meanings mean, such as screaming Swedes means Pewdiepie on ...

This is great! I enjoyed it completely. I too like horses, and so this short really got me. The grammar you used is well accomplished, and you've got your point ...

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i like it a lot its a vere creativ and good idea it as good meneing all in all its grate loved this pome unknown391625keep it up and keep writing ...

Ok, I don't have much context, so the beginning of the story was kinda confusing. But I think I kinda sorta understand the plot of this now, even if it ...

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This must be the shortest work iv ever seen but its all right it has a good Humor to it and a good mening to it good story and keep ...

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Well, that was very interesting. I don't think that this is really a rap. If you were being serious .about it being a rap, or a poem of any sort, ...