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Re: Sleep Won't Come
I totally get this! I always have to think myself to sleep. I like this because almost everyone can relate to this! Your a great poet! Just making something ordinary ...
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Re: Guilty of Being innocent
Bravo! Great! This piece is very original! It has lots of emotions! I have to applaud you for that! Great job! Your a great poet! I love your poetry its ...
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Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.
Wow! Emotion is definitely here. You must have deep feeling about child abuse. I really love this poem because I could imagine that's how an abused child feels. It is ...
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Re: I am just a writer
Bravo! Excellent! Outstanding! Amazing! I really enjoyed this poem because I myself am a writer. It Is a great poem and you're a great poet. I can't wait to read ...
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Re: Sin
Bravo! Excellent! Outstanding! Amazing! Good job! I really like this poem because you just speak your mind there isn't anything where your just like 'Oh I'll just not add this' ...
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Re: The True Monsters
Excellent! Outstanding! Amazing! Great job! I rally liked this poem because its so truthful. Truthful about the world today. Today our world isn't what it used to be or should ...
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Re: Grey
Awesome! Outstanding! Amazing! Excellent! Great job! I really enjoyed reading this. It is beautiful poetry and rhymes in every sentence. I also love the meaning of this poem. I really ...
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Re: What I Am
I LOVE THIS POEM. It shows just about how every girl feels. I can't begun to explain my feelings about this poem it's just amazing! It is amazing and kind ...
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Re: I Know I'm Okay
Bravo! Bravo! Excellent! Great job! I really like this poem because somewhere it does happen. Its a sad poem. But true at heart. This is great poetry and your an ...
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Re: Ode to a Jerk
Bravo! Bravo! Excellent! I really like all the emotion you used in this piece poetry is always better when you use emotion in them. I couldn't see any grammar mistakes. ...
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Re: The Rain Knocks On My Window
Nice! I liked it because where I am there is a lot of rain and it always keeps me up at night. Anyway I think this is a very excellent ...
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Re: Neglected
AWESOME! I love this poem! The reason I love this poem is because it can really touch some peoples hearts. Something some person might be able to relate with. My ...
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Re: The Tiger
GREAT! I love animals and your right. Tigers are to misunderstood! Its a very good poem in my opinion. Your a great poet I certainly couldn't write as good as ...
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Re: Go Back to Bed
Nice! It was a simple but good poem. Even at night I find myself asking these questions and wondering what to do. This poem is very good because almost everyone ...
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Re: The Girl Who Never Smiled
AWWWWHHHHHHH! Its so sweet! And yet sad. Is it true? If so you made a huge impact on a little girls life. She followed her goal till the very end. ...
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