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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Lifes Semantics

    I really enjoyed this poem. The writing style kind of reminded of older poems with the high vocabulary. I love the whole life semantics thing its a really good topic ...

    Jan 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: School

    I loved this poem half of cause I really feel this poem since I'm still in school. There were a few grammar mistakes including capitalizing all the lines ever the ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: revolutionize the world

    I really enjoyed. I like that there was a good flow and semi-rhyming going on. I would say that in the first line I would take out the letter "a" ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Love Me

    I loved the meaning of the poem and the beginning. Closer to the end of the poem it started to stop flowing as well. The part that goes, "I would ...

    Dec 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: By his side (CHRISTmas poem)

    I love this poem. It had a really great christmas theme. You could really feel the christmas spirit. The lines and words used were incredible. The only thing that just ...

    Dec 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Let Me Go

    I feel this poem so much. it's really powerful. I would say that at some points in the poem I didn't like how the stanzas would separate. There were a ...

    Dec 21, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Candle

    I loveee this so much. The last line was so powerful and made me get like relationship vibes where he's basically like the candle and your just a little moth ...

    Dec 14, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: CRAZY YOUNG HEARTS

    Hi, I'm going to review to the best of my abilities. I think the poem itself was good but the view kind of messed with me. It's written in like ...

    Dec 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Snail mail

    I do like the poem, but I think it could be better. I love the descriptions in the first lines of where it is. I would say I get what ...

    Dec 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: naive 2

    I love this poem. At the end of it I really could feel like maybe it was meant to show how quickly people toss items once they get bored of ...

    Dec 12, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last Year's Toys

    I really like the poem and its super unique. The topic was really unique and so was the was it was written. I liked how each line of a stanza ...

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Short Hair

    I love the poem and like you said that it probably wasn't the best but you just had to write something I completely feel that because that's me like most ...

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Concrete Casket (Vol. 1)

    This is like a poem I would except from like Poe. It's really good but there were a few parts that could be rephrased. In the lines, "My jaw locks ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Friend

    I really like the poem. I've had a lot of really close friends and I can feel that in the poem. One thing I would say is it sounds like ...

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: My Heart is Not a Game

    I loved the poem and I felt the emotions cause I have gone through something similiar. It's really good and has a good rhyme scheme/flow to it. I would say ...

    Dec 5, 2019


A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.
— Franz Kafka