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Re: Following the instructions
WOW GIRL!!! This is one of my favorite poems, by anyone, ever. It was very deep, refreshing and beautiful. I loved how in the beginning you inserted comments, such as ...
Feb 22, 2014 -
Re: Write the writer
Wow this is really cool. It is short, which is good not wrong, and that is refreshing. You represented an interesting idea in 18 words. Your poem is kinda like ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Death Note Unleashed: Chapter 1
Whoa that was awesome. Okay some serious plot twists, and cliff hanger! the only thing I didn't like was how plainly you described the characters. The description itself was good, ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: i'm here to tell you
So Here is my review. To begin with my overall opinion is that this is okay. The reason that it is only okay is that your chorus was confusing. Did ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: that's enough
YES, BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!! Your song has a chorus, and I literally just read 5 songs that didn't have a chorus, so thank you. That's enough i just laugh but ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: This is My Story
A few things. One! is this a poem or a song? The formatting makes it seem like a poem, but it is listed as lyrics.... Two! You really should add ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: "The Little Doctor"
That was awesome. I am going to make a list of things I love about this. 1. The doctor is a child, this is a huge plot twist and a ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: A Dead Date
This is so good. Alright what I expected: Sappy Vampire Lines. Unrealistically Hot Vampires that make me angry about them. Cliche vampire stuff. Twilight-like stuff .a horrible story line. What ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Distance
Wow, that was deep and intense. Was this a true story because there was a lot of passion behind it. It was powerful, and moving. The metaphor of the knight ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Beneath the Surface
Alright. So I assume that this is about a girl who suffers from Chronic pain. She is having trouble fitting in because she is in pain all the time. I ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Story of A Life
Hey, good job with your poem. I thought, when I read the title, that it would be either really bad or really sappy. Luckily for all of us it was ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Red Lux
Alright, this was so well written. It flowed smoothly, and had a nice rhythm. I liked the romantic theme, and how you managed not to make the poem really sappy. ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Something about it
Okay, first off so sweet. This is a lovely poem about love, and romance. While reading this my heart skipped and I held my breath. The repetition of the word ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Why my flag is black.
WOW, that was really awesome. Your poem was powerful, driven, passionate and realistic. I say realistic because all of your reasons are valid, and true. Government corrupts, and if we ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: The Man Who Breaks Science
First off may I tip my hat to you. I love DW soooo much, and when I saw this I was skeptical. But now, whoa, awesome job! I loved how ...
Feb 17, 2014
