beccalicious94

This is one of the stronger poems I've seen on YWS. First of all, from the onset, I love the shape of the poem. I always find it interesting when ...

Audy! It's so glad to be back and active and reading your work. As always, this was fabulous! Your colorful diction was refreshing as well as your description of details. ...

Spelling comments: till in the second stanza should read 'til there in the fourth stanza should read their Content comments: The language used was very powerful and illicits emotion. I ...

Spelling corrections: In second stanza 'to' should read 'too' Content: I thought this was a very interesting poem. I liked the symbol of the box representing the heart and using ...

I think the idea of writing a short story based on a song is really cool. I think relationships and marriage are a little bit more nuanced than how you ...

This is phenomenal. I loved the imagery, I loved how you showed and did not tell. I love your use of vivid language. I liked the allusions. Keep it up!

This is a beautiful poem with great imagery. To me this poem make me think of hiding behind darkness. Although I'm not sure and frankly don't need to know why ...

Welcome to YWS, I can see this is your first post. :D I'm really sorry about your boyfriend acting like a jerk. Although all written expression is welcome, I would ...

This is one of the most heartfelt and touching pieces I ever read on YWS. It is authentic, genuine, and I could hear your voice shine through. At times the ...

I can’t explain the joy I get when bruises stain my skin. And no I’m not the sort of guy, Who keeps torment within. It comes off as a bit ...

Although I am in no way qualified to assess the historical premise upon which this poem was written, I find it powerful and emotional. I think you captured the feelings ...

Look! Here, and she'll bow The crowd is hot But no one really knows Who's screaming. Now! Execution Simulation Jealous, Who loves who? When the crowd is In it to ...

I am homeless, It's that simple, What can I say, There is no doubt, I live on the streets, I sleep stars, I am dirty, Cold. I wish for security, ...

I agree with above that the title doesn't fit. How about something like "confessions never spoken"? It is a short, succinct poem that really makes you think. There is vivid ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece! You convey a good sense of emotion with your strong verb choice, and powerful imagery. Not much criticism I can offer. Keep up the ...