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Hi Lauren! Becca here again for another quick review. I thought this was a really great continuation from part 1, and after reading this, am definitely on the edge of ...

Hi Lauren! Becca here for a quick review. I don't usually read short stories, but this one caught my eye. I thought it was interesting that you used a first-person ...

Hi Iridescence! Becca here for a quick review. First off, I'm happy to see you're engaging with the Haiku art form. The Haiku can be beautiful in it's delivery and ...

Hey there Lumi! Becca here for a review. I hope I can repay you the favor, since you've offered me quite the review in the past! ;) I loved this ...

Hi BeTheChange! Becca here for a quick review. I loved this poem (and your use of the word abecedarian)! I'm super impressed with your ability to write a poem using ...

Hi K! Becca here for a quick review. I'll try to leave personal opinions aside and focus on the way you wrote this piece. I definitely found the rant to ...

Hi Rose! Becca here for a quick review. I'm so happy to see a college essay, that's one of the first things I posted on YWS way back when, and ...

Hi Marms! Becca here for a quick review. I think this piece definitely qualifies as humor, and I did find myself smiling and laughing throughout. I think you'd describe a ...

Hi Lareine! Becca here for a quick review. I think you used images in this poem incredibly well. I loved "drives fast on unlit roads," "ring familiar chorus bells," "char ...

Hi Mars! Becca here for a quick review. This is the best thing I've read on YWS all week, so thank you for that. In terms of the first line, ...

Hi Mavis! Becca here for a quick review. I don't usually read the longer pieces on YWS, but I'm so glad I read yours. Let me start off by saying ...

Hi Iridescence! Becca here for a review. I love this poem. I think you chose a great name for the poem, and extended the metaphor of the chrysanthemum from beginning ...

Hi passenger, Becca here for a quick review. You should know, that this is the best thing I've read all week. I think you execute the extended metaphor perfectly. I'm ...

Hi Homachi, Becca here for a quick review. I really loved this piece! I think the narrator of this poem has a really strong, captivating voice and I was so ...

Hi, VegasLights! Becca here for a review. I really enjoyed reading this piece. As someone who is recently coming out of a break-up, I definitely identify with the emotions you ...