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Hey Alex :) So I've got nothing to worry This was really the only line that stood out to me as not flowing well enough. Maybe changing it to "So ...

Ideas creep up the trees of concepts I like the surreal image you’re reaching for with this, ideas behaving like something living, climbing and spreading, but “trees of concepts” feels ...

Hey VCat! I'm here to read and review your work. Thank you for sharing it with us! The pain being experienced in this poem is brought forward very clearly with ...

Hi Rev :) You know the drill! I think this poem is very relevant and speaks to the world we live in and have created for ourselves. I really like ...

Hi Princess! I am here to review your work! This poem is definitely painful. Not painful to read necessarily, it isn't terribly written, just painful content. I think is shows ...

Hi Lynn! I am here to review your work! First off, I really like the rhyming pattern. The imagery used in the poem is clear and perfect for chess, so ...

Hey Serro! I really enjoyed the imagery you used in this. Watching the downward spiral of both Capitalism and Christianity has been quite an interesting show in the time I ...

Hi Creeper! I am here to review your story. Thanks for sharing it with us! I enjoyed it! It wasn’t something that any human had gifted her, but something that ...

Hi Hannax! I'm here to review your work :) This story is a paradox as old as time! I think you captured the essence of it sweetly using cats, especially ...

Hey E! And so begins chapter 3! Let's get to the review :) while one hand of his This would flow better if you changed it to "while one of ...

Hey VCat! Here to review once again! Romantasy is one of my favorite genres so I'm looking forward to reading! "Mom!" A young boy's voice shouted shakily, his dark hair ...

Hello Rebecca! Thanks for sharing your shorty story! the less dumb people know about serial killers then that’s honestly for the better for everyone in the industry of killers and ...

Hey Bee! Not sure if this is meant to be poetry or just kind of a blog entry but wow this is very vulnerable and brave of you to share. ...

Hey swazi! I see you're in the green room and wanted to review your work! Sometimes I think the self of mine is an illusion. I am reminded of Lydia ...

Hey Quiet Cat! I'm here to review your work :) This poem was very striking and emotionally felt deeply. I must say I think many many people have felt these ...