artybirdy

I found the concept to be cliché, but your storytelling maintained my interest. I liked Gerald's character because he accepts Fiorella despite her past. It takes a lot of courage ...

This is an honest piece and it broke my heart a little. You have presented intense feelings and emotions. It also feels personal as you have projected your own internal ...

Hey, ArtStyx's here to review! This is a nice and clean introduction to your short story. You have established your characters, the setting, and a little bit of plot. However, ...

I loved your descriptions! The way Tom admired Sophie's body, it's fabulous! You have succeeded in developing an image in our minds. Though it might not be apparent, I felt ...

I applaud your originality! I have never read about books being the killers. I liked the mystery you have created about the silver binding book. It makes us wonder if ...

I liked your poem! To me, the repetition of “they”, “then” and “but” brings a certain flow to it. You listed out the stages of a relationship and, thus, it’s ...

You have presented a good idea here, and I can understand the message in it. Suicide is never right and those contemplating it, have to understand that their actions can ...

I’ll admit I’m one of those people. I aim for perfection all the time, and I hate it. It’s done subconsciously and I believe media and the society in general ...

I laughed all the way through. Your imagination is wild! The story changed directions often, but that was the point! That’s what free writing is all about. I came back ...

The ending, wow! I didn't expect it. I thought it'd be another Romeo and Juliet love story, but you proved me wrong. I loved your concept, and can see potential ...

First of all, apologies for the late review. I read your chapters yesterday, but didn’t have the time to stop by. Honestly, I imagined the epilogue to be years later. ...

This poem describes the feeling of a person deeply in love. It gives us, the readers, both sides of love: pain and happiness. Your poem reflects the "real" love and, ...

You know what I liked the most? The use of descriptions/details to show us an insight into Talia’s struggle to keep Dye at bay; it helps us engage into the ...

You have shown us a person’s internal struggle through this short piece, and their need to protect their loved one. The speaker recognises that they have to deal with their ...

I like the honesty in your poem. The speaker admits their mistake and feel the need to repent. It sounds like he/she used to be a bully and have now ...