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Re: Chapter 37: The Revelation
I just want you to know that my sister chased me all around the house hitting me with a book when she read this part. I have been punished for ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Starman Prologue (Part 2/?) : Stealing a Picture and the Moon
Okay. I'm assuming Introduction is exposition and it's ended by your iciting incident. You definitely don't want to rush into the conflict, I would say at least two scenes before ...
Nov 28, 2014 -
Re: Starman Prologue ( Part 1 /? ) : To Steal a Picture and Find the Moon
Wow. I was very impressed by your writing. You've blended a lot of essential elements together. It's also super creative, but not so much that I can't visualize what's going ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Heading West: The Oregon Trail
Haha, that's funny. And I definitely see what you mean. It's just that the death rate was closer to five to ten percent, whereas for me it seemed like everyone ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 42: The Decision
Actually, I'm planning five books in this series :) Book two is my Nano novel and I'm to 40,000 words. xD
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: Hauntception
Thank you. Yeah, both beat and con't are script terms. beat implies a beat of silence and Con't implies continued...Sorry for not clarifying those. Glad you liked it. Hopefully my ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 2.2
It's funny cuz this review is still longer than most people's...Cricket's just that amazing.
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 29: The Facility
Thank you for your review, it was very helpful. There's one thing I would like to clarify, however. While traditionally, warlocks have been male and witches female, my book, along ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Burrow.5.
Parents are great resources, have of what I know about writing I learned form my mom. xD
Nov 7, 2014 -
Re: The Rogue Ch.4
Oh, i was going to mention that too, I really liked the picture at the beginning...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: A Lost Star
I'm LDS actually, or Mormon as we're sometimes called.
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: A Nerd's Lament
No, if you don't care then your all good. A no, it was a pretty mild poem, just laughs, so you're all good. :) "You're all good" must be a ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 27: The Capitol
You just made my day. Because, this was like, my favorite chapter to write and when she told me to cut it it almost broke my heart. So thank you ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 25: The Recovery
Thanks so much, this was very helpful. And funny story, I've actually finished this novel...and I'm on draft 3 xD.
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Escaping The Kidnapper- Chapter 2
Hello again. Great job keeping the suspense up! I'm fairly certain you're a better writer than I was at your age. Suddenly Andrea felt her eyelids becoming heavier. Let's talk ...
Oct 26, 2014