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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Desire

    Hey there persephonesgarden! Thanks again for the reviews on my novel. I'll start with saying I love your username and welcome again to YSW! Hope you enjoy it here! Poetry ...

    Dec 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: boring domesticated life

    Hey there creaturefeature! Your description says this could be poetry and I definitely see that it is! Let's get into my commentary. I like to comment on poetry by stanza ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: asphalt

    Helloooo! My first and main comment on this is: WOW! There are dynamics about this that makes this so profound! First, I love the way it is structured. I can ...

    Dec 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holder

    Wow! This is a great read! Let's get into it. Side note, hi there, Rodger! Such a good boy you are (speaking to avatar LOL). I am a dog-momma myself ...

    Dec 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1

    Hello ForeverYoung999! I hope your holiday season is going well. The title of this and how it does not have a specific name caught my eye. So, I figured I'd ...

    Dec 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: down the drain

    Hiiiii luxeterna! First off, I love your avatar!!!! So cute

    Nov 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: new skin for the old ceremony

    Hey there creaturefeature! Hope all is well in your world. The title of this caught my eye in the green room so I thought I would read and review. Let's ...

    Nov 14, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The bitter phase of life

    Hello RickBaroooah! Welcome to YSW! ッッッ The title of this work caught my eye in the green room, so I thought I would give it a read and review! Let's ...

    Nov 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Ethereal Encounters

    Hiii hkumar! I love your avatar! It makes me happy ッ I hope you're hungry because I will be making quite the review🍩 I do-nut know if you've ever had ...

    Nov 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Would We Still Be Friends?

    Hey-lo spottedpebble! A, here to write a donut review🍩 Wishing you well wherever you are in the world. Do-nut fret! We're getting into what I love about this first! Here ...

    Nov 7, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Romantic Re: Distanced Intimacy

    Hello, AbstractConfidential! ˚ ༘♡ ·˚꒰ᥕᥱᥣᥴ᥆꧑ᥱ t᥆ ᥡSw꒱ ₊˚ˑ༄ I hope you find comradery and inspiration here. I'll be serving a yummy donut review🍩 For the sprinkles,

    Nov 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Devine Retribution

    Hey there, CotardDelusionz. First off, I love your avatar! I hope you're hungry because I'll serve my scrum-diddly-umptious Oreo review. 😋 Here it goes... Starting with the first cookie or ...

    Nov 7, 2023
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: To Those Who've Been Hurt.

    Hello, JerrodeD! Welcome to YSW, and happy hauntings! Thank you for sharing this personal piece. It hits right in the feels. The way you have written this is similar to ...

    Oct 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: The Potentiality of Infinite Chickens

    Hey there, Liminality! Happy hauntings! This was posted in February, but it's October now for this review. I always love it when writers address reviewers. I feel like this can ...

    Oct 29, 2023
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Ten People, Ten shades

    Hey there, Ayeesha! I love your name! This is short, and I want more!!! It aligns well with the genre of mystery and suspense. I am left with questions: why ...

    Oct 28, 2023


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