aouther2b

Hey aouther2b here. I am really excited to get to review such a good piece. So I'll dive right in. The good: 1. The emotion- I love it's constant presence. ...

Hi so I want to formaly reveiw your poem, because it rocks so much that I feel that any critism I give it will only serve to make it better. ...

This is a intresting piece. There are parts I like, but there are also parts that I don't. I am intruiged by the idea's you have and your observations of ...

Okay so I am going to review this piece today, and I hope it is of some help. What I liked: 1. The flow. The fact you go from one ...

Hi there. this was an intresting piece and I can't wait to review it. The good parts: 1. The imagery is really good in all lines of the poem. That ...

This is an intresting piece... I can't wait to review it. The Good Parts: 1. I loved the opening. It was really well written and got me to read the ...

Hey there. So i skimmed through the previous review, so sorry if I repeat anything. So onto the review. Good parts: 1. The imagery and emotion in this piece are ...

Hi there. Its really early so sorry if the review doesn't make sense. Sooo this is an intresting piece. The good points: All good works need a skeleton, and this ...

Hi. I love the emotion and beauty of this piece and topic. I am so excited to review it! :D The good about the poem: 1. Emotion! I love how ...

Hi there! I will be the review today, and I am very excited. Sorry if I repeat anything, but it will help you make sure to change it I would ...

Hi there, I am here to review this piece. (obviously!) So I hope all this helps. Its short and sweet and to the point, but you already knew that. It ...

Hi, this is really good. I love how you have managed to embody depression, give it a shape and make it almost human. There is little I find wrong in ...

Hi, so this is an intresting piece you have. I like it for many reasons. You're ability to create such imagery is at such a great place. I love the ...

This is beautifully written. The emotion and imagery you've created stuns me. From the first to last line you keep me in this web of thoughts, and I love it. ...

This is really good. I love the emotion you tried to express. I am also apprecative of the fact you let the reader know what you were trying to accomplish. ...