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aouther2b

  • Poetry » General, Fanfiction Re: Respect Women

    Hey there, aouther2b here to review this interesting piece. Here we go! What I liked: 1. The topic. Going for the obvious here. As a female I liked what you ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A Look Through

    Aouther2b here and excited to review! What I liked: 1. The interpretation of the idea. You acknowledge in the beginning that what you're writing about are the cliches you see ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Can You Hear Me Now?

    Aouther2b here excited to review this wonderful piece. What I liked: 1. The emotion behind it. Without using many words you were able to convey the hurt, the anguish and ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: it

    Aouther2b is back to review (i haven't been on in a while so I'm back, and what a great way to return)! This piece is very good! It needs work, ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Unfinished Business

    Hey there aouther2b here and ready to review this piece. So excited, it's like almost midnight so late night reviewing ensues. What I liked: 1. The theme/idea/message. I have written ...

    Jan 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Horror Re: You Don't Know, and I Don't Know.

    Hey there, auother2b here and ready to review this piece. What I liked: 1. The structure. Oh my goodness. The way you formated this piece just did wonders for it. ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Buried Truth

    Hey there aouther2b here to review this piece, so lets get to it shall we? What I liked: 1. The concept. Now don't get me wrong I don't support anorexia ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Glass girl

    So its aouther2b here to review. I read your little description thing and had to laugh because its very funny how at midnigt we have brilliant thhougts that aren't always ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Watercolour Winter.

    Hey there, auother2b here and excited review this piece. In your note you mentioned this one of your best works and though I have not read anything else you've written ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Attention

    Hey there, author2b here and ready to review, giving this poem some attention. Haha, see what I did there? (I'm sure you did, and I'm just being silly.) So here ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken

    If you got a newsletter from yws a while back you may have been like me and clicked the diffrence between good emotional poetry and the typicaly emo poetry. One ...

    Dec 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Broken

    Hey aouther2b here to review. What I liked: 1. "Over he who broke you" I love this line so much. It is perfec for this piece. The syntax yiu chose ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Tree Who Wanted To Fly.

    Hey there. I really liked this piece. So happy I get to review it. What I liked: 1. The idea. I enjoyed this orginal idea. You got your theme and ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Silent Lover

    Hey there author2b here to review this piece. What I liked: 1. The repetitiveness. You may get some mixed reviews on this, but I will tell you now I enjoyed ...

    Oct 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Different Sides of the Same Story

    I didn't even know how to start this review I was so stunned. This piece, its... amazing. I love it so much. What I liked: 1. The emotion. Enough said. ...

    Oct 24, 2013


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