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Hello WeirdoPotato! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So first and foremost, I like the repetition. It works really well emphasizing the emotions and thoughts behind ...

Hello! Via here for the review. So let's get started. This poem is very personal and heart felt. I can feel your loss, grief, and raw emotions through the words. ...

Hello. Via back with another review! By the way, just saw your profile! A warm and happy welcome to Youth Writer's Society! I hope you enjoy your stay here! So ...

Hello there! Via here for a review! So let's get to it! The message you're bringing is very clear and concise with your choice of language. There is nothing there ...

This hits home right here. Absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful. I adore that you chose to keep it simple and not override the message with unnecessary filler such as intricate vocabulary when ...

I am so happy right now, it's not even funny. I am an experimental poet myself, and often times I find myself being the only one in my writing classes ...

Good day! Here's a review. Name's Olivia, you can call me Vi though. First impression wise: I honestly had no idea what I was expecting. I've read a lot of ...

This is beautiful. Just beautiful. I feel your emotions and the journey that you described the experience as. Kudos to you for saying what you want to say about this ...

I am lost for words, SilverNight. The format of your prose, and the intricacy of choice of words, is beautiful. This piece is not quite poetry or short story, it's ...

Hello FlamingHomosexual (by the way love the username), I'm here to leave a little review. I actually really liked these pieces. Honestly, you can format this in a way to ...

Hello! Back again for another review. I actually liked this poem more than "Drowning", I don't know why. I found the descriptive language and whimsical, dream-like lines complimentary to the ...

Hello LUNARGIRL! I quite enjoyed this piece. The poem gives off a dark and negative energy, which I think was your intention. I found the choice of metaphors like the ...

This was absolutely witty and hilarious in the best way! The very first line hooked me and I couldn't stop reading! You made the poem very unique in structure, like ...

A perfect example of well written free verse! Often times, I see writers cloud their work with run off sentences and excessive, nonessential imagery, but this was wonderful! The epitome ...

Hello Via! I quite enjoyed this piece. The main idea and theme of the poem is clearly described and portrayed in the poem, which is great. I loved the use ...