The beginning of this poem honestly pulled me right in. I think the structure was very unique and it definitely hooked me more. I love the symbolism and metaphors sprinkled throughout. Overall it was very artistic and I loved how you expressed feelings through the rhyme scheme. Many lines in this definitely hit home for me. I liked the wildfire imagery and wish that idea was brought and explored more. Good job!!
Points: 170
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