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Re: A Proverb Of Mankind
Hello HJ Young! I wonder if you remember me from reviewing your poem, Of Mankind. I loved that previous poem and was deeply impressed by it. I'm in awe of ...
May 9, 2021 -
Re: The Greatest Risk of All
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So let's get started! POSITIVES: I love the repetition of the word "risk" to add emphasis to what points ...
May 8, 2021 -
Re: dedicated to the mother i never had
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review! So let's get started. POSITIVES: First and foremost, I absolutely adore the structure of this poem. The free verse ...
May 8, 2021 -
Re: the post-heartbreak silence
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So... let's get started. POSITIVES: First of all, I adore this poem. It's simple, sweet, clear, and concise. So ...
Apr 30, 2021 -
Re: on the creation of us
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review! So let's started. POSITIVES: First and foremost, I love this poem! It's very descriptive and concise when it comes ...
Apr 30, 2021 -
Re: Snapdragon
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So... let's get started. First and foremost, I love a good nature poem. I love how you utilize the ...
Mar 30, 2021 -
Re: Of Mankind
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So let's get started. First and foremost, you have impeccable vocabulary. I spotted a lot of words that a ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: we are lost at sea, lost in our own minds
Hello! I'm Via and I'm here for a review. So... let's get started. First and foremost, I LOVE a poem that uses more aesthetic and visual aspects to add layers ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: Overwhelming Love
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. By the way, this is a very short and simple piece, so my review is going to be very ...
Mar 16, 2021 -
Re: When Does My Existence Begin?
Hello! My name is Via, and I'm here for a review. So let's get started. First and foremost, I love a good poem with an existential and philosophical theme. Often ...
Mar 1, 2021 -
Re: i refuse to outlive you
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review. So let's get started! This right here is just lovely. I can tell that you edited and revised this ...
Feb 23, 2021 -
Re: Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren
Hello! My name is Via, and I'm here for a review, so let's get to it. First and foremost, I love the title and the use of Elven language. I've ...
Feb 18, 2021 -
Re: Cloud
Hello! My name is Via! I'm here for a review. So... let's get this party started! First and foremost, I love the descriptions here. The vivid language describing the cloud, ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Tanka about Symbolic Logic
Hello! My name is Via and I'm here for a review, so let's get down to business. I actually really like this poem. It has a lot of great well-thought ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: decision: the key to life
Hello 1234! I'm Via and I'm here for a review. So first of all, I love the abstract, sort of philosophical topic and theme you picked. The way you chose ...
Feb 8, 2021