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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: 4021

    Hi Ashley123, acm here for a review. I really liked this writing, especially with its twist ending. There was a good story line in it, and you didn't give too ...

    Dec 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wicked

    Hi Dime666, acm here for a review! This was a very interesting poem. I liked the idea of a girl who seems bad but is beautiful to someone else was ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Dilemma

    Hi, Sharon1407! Acm here for a review. I really enjoyed reading this because I always love it when poems rhyme. It gives them a nice flow. The concept of the ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Footsteps

    Hi! Acm here for a quick review. I really liked this poem. It was very descriptive and had good imagery. I could picture exactly what was happening at any point ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Kitten

    Hi Scartuina, acm here for a review! I thought this piece was really descriptive and had good comparisons in it, but I'm not sure I got the meaning. Here's my ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: So We Kill

    Hi Gravity, acm here for a quick review! This was a very powerful piece and you can easily understand the meaning and the purpose. I had a few favorite stanzas, ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: a foreword

    Hi circadianrhythm, welcome to YWS! This was a very good poem and I really liked the wording and how the lines were all the right length with none being too ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I give myself

    Hi Casanova, acm here for a review! I've always liked rhyming poems because they give each line a nice flow, and you had that, mostly. I really liked the idea ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: wait up, guys!

    Hi heath, acm here for a short review! First, I'd like to say that I liked this poem, even though short poem usually aren't my thing. It had meaning to ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bitter Candy

    Hi Aravind, acm here for a review! I really liked the ideas of this piece, because I would have never thought of comparing depression to bitter candy. I can see ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How naive I was

    Hi, RadiantShadow, acm here to review your poem! This piece was really meaningful, and I didn't really see the theme until I read the last stanza. The ending lines were ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Petty Hypocrisy (It's a Pity It's Me)

    Hi soundofmind, acm here for a review! This poem was really relatable, especially for me, since I feel this way quite a lot. Your poem had great imagery, too. I ...

    Jun 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Spoken Farewells (I hope you understand)

    Hi AliceAfternoon, acm here for a quick review! I love this poem, for many reasons, but the biggest one is because I can understand and relate to it. My family ...

    Jun 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: All I Am Now

    Hi CHarlotte2, acm here for a quick review! I really liked this poem. The ending was especially powerful, I think. The flow of the poem, however, made it sound choppy ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love & Death

    Hi DicergentDemigod and Radiant Shadow, acm here to review your poem! That was an interesting poem. I really like the idea of comparing love and death, because you don't normally ...

    Jun 19, 2016


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening