"hey, best friend! wait up!"
i guess you didn't hear me the
"you guys can go on without me!"
Friends are important in our lives and when they don't listen I don't think we can not call them our friends, from friends we can learn to accept, to move on and to rememeber.I know a goodbye is sometimes hard, but it can also lead us to new ways. If friends don't listen I think they have a good reason for that. Maybe they run away and comeback, but maybe not.If they comeback, we are happy, if they aren't come back, we are sad and disapointment. I know that, friendship in Life is very important, without friends, there's NO life This is a nice written poem, it looks like lyrics....Love: Bree.
Hey, me here for a short review!I found this extremely relatable, especially to my life here lately. I like the "I guess you didn't hear me" because it basically says that the person knows they're being ignored or outcasted, yet they're so faithful to their "best friend" they don't want to believe that they'd do something like that. The "go on without me at the end" really seemed to be kind of that point where this person has basically has basically given up on trying to catch up to their so called "best friend". And this giving up is also basically the beginning of letting them go. I really liked this piece a lot. Keep up the good work!
Hola, heath! This was so relatable! I'm sure this has happened to literally everyone one time or another. There should be a space in between second and third and a comma after second but other than that this was perfect! Keep writing and I hope you enjoy your day!
Hi heath, acm here for a short review!First, I'd like to say that I liked this poem, even though short poem usually aren't my thing. It had meaning to it, like someone being left behind at the same place they were while their friends go along to achieve great things without looking back. The only thing I saw was in the second line of the second stanza:
Hey Dogs here to review!First off I really like your poem and I totally understand the concept and feeling.I have a couple of nitpicks, but after that we will get into the good part of my review!Nitpicks:1)
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