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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: 4021

    Hi Ashley123, acm here for a review. I really liked this writing, especially with its twist ending. There was a good story line in it, and you didn't give too ...

    Dec 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wicked

    Hi Dime666, acm here for a review! This was a very interesting poem. I liked the idea of a girl who seems bad but is beautiful to someone else was ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Dilemma

    Hi, Sharon1407! Acm here for a review. I really enjoyed reading this because I always love it when poems rhyme. It gives them a nice flow. The concept of the ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Footsteps

    Hi! Acm here for a quick review. I really liked this poem. It was very descriptive and had good imagery. I could picture exactly what was happening at any point ...

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Kitten

    Hi Scartuina, acm here for a review! I thought this piece was really descriptive and had good comparisons in it, but I'm not sure I got the meaning. Here's my ...

    Sep 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: So We Kill

    Hi Gravity, acm here for a quick review! This was a very powerful piece and you can easily understand the meaning and the purpose. I had a few favorite stanzas, ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: a foreword

    Hi circadianrhythm, welcome to YWS! This was a very good poem and I really liked the wording and how the lines were all the right length with none being too ...

    Aug 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: I give myself

    Hi Casanova, acm here for a review! I've always liked rhyming poems because they give each line a nice flow, and you had that, mostly. I really liked the idea ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: wait up, guys!

    Hi heath, acm here for a short review! First, I'd like to say that I liked this poem, even though short poem usually aren't my thing. It had meaning to ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bitter Candy

    Hi Aravind, acm here for a review! I really liked the ideas of this piece, because I would have never thought of comparing depression to bitter candy. I can see ...

    Jun 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How naive I was

    Hi, RadiantShadow, acm here to review your poem! This piece was really meaningful, and I didn't really see the theme until I read the last stanza. The ending lines were ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Petty Hypocrisy (It's a Pity It's Me)

    Hi soundofmind, acm here for a review! This poem was really relatable, especially for me, since I feel this way quite a lot. Your poem had great imagery, too. I ...

    Jun 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Spoken Farewells (I hope you understand)

    Hi AliceAfternoon, acm here for a quick review! I love this poem, for many reasons, but the biggest one is because I can understand and relate to it. My family ...

    Jun 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Fantasy Re: All I Am Now

    Hi CHarlotte2, acm here for a quick review! I really liked this poem. The ending was especially powerful, I think. The flow of the poem, however, made it sound choppy ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love & Death

    Hi DicergentDemigod and Radiant Shadow, acm here to review your poem! That was an interesting poem. I really like the idea of comparing love and death, because you don't normally ...

    Jun 19, 2016


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides