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  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Make Me

    Heyyy, Rubes here with a review! I really enjoyed the piece and think it was extremely well written. In my reviews I like to pick a few quotes and analyse ...

    Jun 24, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Soil of misery

    Heyyy, Rubes here with a review! I really enjoyed the piece and think it was extremely well written. In my reviews I like to pick a few quotes and analyse ...

    Jun 24, 2022

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: dream to be gone

    Hey, its rubes here with a review. Just to make this clearly stated, I seperate my reviews into 3 sections. Section one involves of me explaining my first thoughts and ...

    Dec 23, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: To catch a sunrise.

    Hey, Rubes here with a review. Just to make this clearly stated, I seperate my reviews into 3 sections. Section one involves of me explaining my first thoughts and impressions, ...

    Dec 23, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Fall.

    Heya, Rubes here with a review. I like to spilt my work into 4 sections: First impressions (what I think after reading once), deeper meanings (more examinations into single lines ...

    Sep 25, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Your Beauty

    Heya, Rubes here with a review. I like to spilt my work into 4 sections: First impressions (what I think after reading once), deeper meanings (more examinations into single lines ...

    Sep 25, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Fallen Angel

    Hey Rubes here with a review, I split my reviews into 3/4 different sections: first impressions, what went well (www), improvements (ebi) and conclusion summing up what i thought :) ...

    Sep 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: touch

    Hey there, Rubes with a shortish review here! I usually divide my reviews into four sections: first impressions, what went well (www), improvement ideas (ebi) and conclusion summing up all ...

    Sep 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Pearls

    Heya, Ruby here with a quick review! I usually split them into three different parts: overview based on structure and base language, deeper meanings and inferences from particular sentences as ...

    Aug 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Shell

    Heya, Ruby here with a quick review! I usually split them into three different parts: overview based on structure and base language, deeper meanings and inferences from particular sentences as ...

    Aug 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: No Longer Flowing

    Heya, Rubes here with a review. (I am a bit younger than you so some things I say may be a repeat of what others have told you however I ...

    Aug 3, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Olympic Somonka: The Mirror

    Heya, Rubes here with a review! Hope some of this stuff helps you improve in more pieces to come. (I am 3 years younger than you so some of this ...

    Aug 3, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Fool's Apology

    Heya, Rubes here with a quick review! (I am a 13 year old student so some of this may not be your level or exactly the feedback you need but ...

    Jul 16, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: In My Head

    Heya, Rubes here with a review! (First of all, just know that I am a 13 year old writer just wanting to write and review other's work; this review may ...

    Jul 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Tiny bits of you

    Heya, Rubes here with a review quickly! (First of all, please just know that I am in Year 8 (13 years old) so some of this feedback may be irrelevant ...

    Jul 10, 2021


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