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Hey, Rascalover! This piece was rather heart-aching, and you definitely built up that feeling of sadness, lost, and longing. You slowly explained it while Paul was pacing the house, making ...

Hello, JoytheBrave! I like how you compared the sun and the moo as siblings, and painted a clear connection. I think that, in a way, eclipses are like sisters, they ...

Hey there, AndrewRayne! I really like your style of writing. In a way, it has a short of Shakespeare-y sound to it (if that makes any sense whatsoever). I like ...

Hello, ForgottonMemories! I found this story rather odd. One of the things that kind of bothered me throughout the story is that homosexuals can't have children, rather than what I ...

Hi there, Tigerlily37! This is such a short little poem, and I don't see anything wrong with it. I guess this means it isn't really much of a review, but ...

Hi there, Meandbooks! Such a cute little short story you have here, and I love your word choice! I would love to see more cute little stories like this, especially ...

Hello, yubbies12! A nice topic you have chosen to write about, something I could sort of agree with. You stated your opinion clearly, and I really like how you brought ...

'Sup, CaptainSaltWater. Let's get started with this review, and with review day, shall we? I myself am I very religious person. However, I do have atheist friends, and I do ...

Hello, Odd! (I like your username, by the way. Approval.) This will be a relatively short review, mostly because I think you've fixed everything by now. I guess I could ...

Hello, theironnovelist! I'm going to make this a relatively short review, mostly because I can. I'm making my own theory that what this person truly has is indeed a disorder, ...

Hello, myjaspercat! Let's talk about your prologue, shall we? Let's start with what you can fix: "Somewhere in the distance she could hear the snarling of an affected dog"-I'm thinking ...

Hi, ljkrogman10! You just gave me a heartache, and to be honest, my eyes started to water. This is probably one of my new favorite pieces of YWS. It says ...

Hi, Firelight! I really like this poem, and I would love to see more like this. I feel like this is how we start of: personality-less. Slowly, we uncover who ...

Hello, lhykv! You have a special username, but that's not our topic at the moment. Our topic is this poem-which I found rather interesting. This is my take on it: ...

Hello, WaltzingDreams! Your story seems rather peculiar, but that makes it kind of intriguing. Perhaps the willow tree has a deep poetical meaning? I've always loved willow trees, so I ...