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Re: Oh shooey!
Wow, As usual your poem rocks. It was way much funnier throughout the poem. Can't take the eyes-off. It sounded awesome. "You nailed your humor like hammer in these following ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: del
Wow, this is an amazing piece of work, I know how hard it is to make a poem rhyme, you have done an awesome work in rhyme scheme These lines ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Haven't met you today
This is a very touching poem. Your words express intensely about how much the speaker miss his beloved. The speaker's longing and his numbness has been coherently spoken by these ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Once I met a Teacher
This was an awesome poetry. I liked the way you have portrayed your teacher. The words itself paints the respect you have for her.When I went through your words, I ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Ripping Pages
Your poem was an awesome read. I loved these following lines: "He’s running out of ink But a pen’s fairly easy to replace Everyday, closing in on the brink He’s ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Just call him crazy: Villanelle
This was great.I like the way you have structured this poem.The character of this crazy person is beautifully portrayed.I loved the way it started and the coherence was amazing. I ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: The First Time I Saw You..
You poem was went so smooth in words and was eager to read what's next,It was like,Hey girl don't you see his love.You totally pulled me in by these lines: ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: forever haunting me
Your poem was so intense.Women harrasment, the forte that haunts the world.You have portrayed it so well. These lines gave life to the theme: "crushing her down his hands touching ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: Bill, the fish
The story was great.I was totally into felt like I was in the narrator's place.Your words made me come into the story. When you started the story, I thought you ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: 11:11
Your poem is impressive and an exclusive topic.I love the way you have structured. These lines were realistic: "A hope for something that seems out of reach But then, they ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: Captain's Log
This is an awesome was intriguing, It was like what next? what next?From the very beginning to the end your poem was alive,it had a grasp and that's what make ...
May 23, 2018 -
Re: My Sister
Oh my God! this poem was impressive,I have a brother.I now got the feeling he must have got. I always used to call him an overprotective brother,But having a sibling,this ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Midnight Lusts
The words used are intense and makes me feel engrossed that play in my head,thanks for the words giving the theatrical effect. The last four lines displayed the feeling got ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: The Shadow Starkers Poem
This poem was unique and way more intriguing, the words you have used like cass,unof,..I comprehended them actually.Many won't take the risk of using cass(inspired by you,lol), people won't understand
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Love Is Another Lie
This an impressive work,the way you started and ended it had correlation,I was about to think it had deviated elsewhere then came the started as if complaining and ended as ...
May 22, 2018
