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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Facade

    Another great poem! Well said, If happiness is nothing. It cost us nothing. Reading this poem, i remembered the quote, “The problem with wearing a facade is that sooner or ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Graffiti

    WOW! The relation between divulging the love in public and the graffiti is simply awesome. Have got great creativity in you. My heart does melt for the words painted here: ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her heart

    Hey, Braniac! This is an amazing work! I liked it much. It just drilled the depth of pain. The longing of heart was beautifully painted. Man, these lines: She craved ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: d.f.

    Hey, dwyn! This is an amazing piece. I liked how you started the poem with slow pace, it felt pleasant by reading this line: everything feels okay, and that's because ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lust : Chapter 1 : The Note.

    Hey, Eros! That's right, I am exploring your works now. I enjoyed the read. You excel in prose too. I liked the way it is written. I like the the ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Sold for Rs 50,000/-

    Hey, Eros! It started so pleasant and came the situation 'welcome to the real world' Another beautiful sunrise ...the cuckoos singing sweetly, the birds chirping merrily and the little boys ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Dictionary

    Hi, ScarredSecrets! This is a unique piece of poetry, I liked it much. The pain engraved was felt in each and every line. We do feel that when we are ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: disconnect

    Hey, Kale! I enjoyed the read, one suggestion with the concept is we love spending time with the soulmate and the bond will be eternal. you should've replaced that word ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: Lovely Metaphors

    Hey, Traves! The title of your poem is intriguing, I could get the totally the vibe of the poem when I read it.The rhyme-scheme is perfect, didn't feel forced, it ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Diamond heart

    Hey, Ayushinav! Oh my God!! Amazing poem. The rhyme schemes were great. I enjoyed the read. The sun smiled upon me, with the earth dancing beneath my tiny footsteps. My ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Let the sparrow transform into the Eagle...

    Hey, Eros! The title of the article is a clever choice. I adore the way you give the titles to your work, and that upheaves the content. I just loved ...

    Jun 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When will it stop

    Hey, Ignites! I enjoyed the read. It was a moving poem. Like shadows under clock hands Turning and turning Coming back To the same point The same time Again and ...

    Jun 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Within My Own Entwines

    Hey, Eros! The title of your poem is intriguing, I could get the vibe of of the poem out of it.The rhyme-scheme is perfect, didn't feel forced, it was with ...

    Jun 28, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Birch Tree

    Hey, Lives! You have a knack in giving the message cut to the bone. It's really impressive and nails your potential. I liked it much. Great description in few words. ...

    Jun 27, 2018
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: My Worst Fear

    Hey, my friend! I enjoyed the read. This was a theatrical piece. The images just floated in my head, you adeptly have described the speaker's plight in this poem. I ...

    Jun 24, 2018


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