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Re: Facade
Another great poem! Well said, If happiness is nothing. It cost us nothing. Reading this poem, i remembered the quote, “The problem with wearing a facade is that sooner or ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Graffiti
WOW! The relation between divulging the love in public and the graffiti is simply awesome. Have got great creativity in you. My heart does melt for the words painted here: ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Her heart
Hey, Braniac! This is an amazing work! I liked it much. It just drilled the depth of pain. The longing of heart was beautifully painted. Man, these lines: She craved ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: d.f.
Hey, dwyn! This is an amazing piece. I liked how you started the poem with slow pace, it felt pleasant by reading this line: everything feels okay, and that's because ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Lust : Chapter 1 : The Note.
Hey, Eros! That's right, I am exploring your works now. I enjoyed the read. You excel in prose too. I liked the way it is written. I like the the ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Sold for Rs 50,000/-
Hey, Eros! It started so pleasant and came the situation 'welcome to the real world' Another beautiful sunrise ...the cuckoos singing sweetly, the birds chirping merrily and the little boys ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: My Dictionary
Hi, ScarredSecrets! This is a unique piece of poetry, I liked it much. The pain engraved was felt in each and every line. We do feel that when we are ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: disconnect
Hey, Kale! I enjoyed the read, one suggestion with the concept is we love spending time with the soulmate and the bond will be eternal. you should've replaced that word ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Lovely Metaphors
Hey, Traves! The title of your poem is intriguing, I could get the totally the vibe of the poem when I read it.The rhyme-scheme is perfect, didn't feel forced, it ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Diamond heart
Hey, Ayushinav! Oh my God!! Amazing poem. The rhyme schemes were great. I enjoyed the read. The sun smiled upon me, with the earth dancing beneath my tiny footsteps. My ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Let the sparrow transform into the Eagle...
Hey, Eros! The title of the article is a clever choice. I adore the way you give the titles to your work, and that upheaves the content. I just loved ...
Jun 30, 2018 -
Re: When will it stop
Hey, Ignites! I enjoyed the read. It was a moving poem. Like shadows under clock hands Turning and turning Coming back To the same point The same time Again and ...
Jun 28, 2018 -
Re: Within My Own Entwines
Hey, Eros! The title of your poem is intriguing, I could get the vibe of of the poem out of it.The rhyme-scheme is perfect, didn't feel forced, it was with ...
Jun 28, 2018 -
Re: Birch Tree
Hey, Lives! You have a knack in giving the message cut to the bone. It's really impressive and nails your potential. I liked it much. Great description in few words. ...
Jun 27, 2018 -
Re: My Worst Fear
Hey, my friend! I enjoyed the read. This was a theatrical piece. The images just floated in my head, you adeptly have described the speaker's plight in this poem. I ...
Jun 24, 2018
