Wonder

Out of all of these, Fly was my favorite. My breath caught in my throat and I didn't let exhale until a few moments after I read the last word. ...

Haha I love this so much! This describes my neighbor's cat perfectly!! XD Except his name isn't Mr. Casey, and the cat isn't cuddly at all. Fat, but very, very ...

Beautiful poem. :') I LOVE it!! The rhyming was great (I love it when poets actually take the time to make their poems rhyme. And no, that was not supposed ...

As I read this, I felt the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end, I swear to God. I'm not kidding -- WOW. I showed it to ...

I'm not sure what book this fanfiction was based off of, but I love Adelaide's wit. I was grinning the whole time I read it!! :3 Everything looks good. Although ...

Hello!! :) Okay, so I really liked the plot of this story. Who doesn't like a story about a girl and her pony? However, there are a few things that ...

At the end of this poem, my mouth was literally drooping. Like this: :( That is a sign that your poem was successful. However, I read it again, and I ...

I swear, in my head I was silently rapping your poem. Right after I post this review I'm going to record myself rapping this; I love it so much now. ...

Amazing. This is really beautiful. I don't know the rules for an 'English sonnet', but I really love it and get the meaning. I really love the last stanza, but ...

:O HE DIED????!!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!! NO NO NO HE CAN'T DIE HE CAN'T DIE AT ALL HE'S THE MAIN CHARACTER OF THE STORY AND THEN THAT MEANS THE STPRY WOULD END ...

This is very true: "The mirror tells such petty lies..." My friend always feels the need to grow skinnier, and I'm afraid she's becoming anorexic, despite the fact that she's ...

Amazing. Wow. WOW. That is literally all I can say. I did not expect this. My eyes are really big right now, and my mouth, just a few moments earlier, ...

Okay, so really nice chapter. ;) I liked it a LOT!!! :D However, remember to spell out all numbers less than ten, like writing 'one' or 'seven' instead of 1 ...

Nice job! I'm totally hooked. :) What happens next?? Please write more! D: I love how you described the characters (I'm paranoid about that...I need adjectives in a story!!!) One ...

Nice! I really like how the story is going so far. One thing to remember though is your commas. In the last line, for example, you could've written, "Uh, OW!" ...