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Re: Chapter one: The dead city
Hello there! Just came across this, and decided to review it. So, though it was short, I really like what you're getting at! I think you should make it half ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: Wings, Chapter 1
Hello, gonna leave you a review! Overall, I really enjoyed the start of your story. I've always enjoyed stories like these. I really liked how you gradually started hinting around ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: First Love
Hello, gonna leave you a review! Overall, I genuinely enjoyed reading this short story. It's hard for me to gain empathy for characters, especially in shorter works, but you successfully ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: Shadow...
Okay, gonna leave you a review! :D Firstly, I love what you chose to write about. The idea of your shadow being your lifelong friend, gives me feelings of sadness ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: The Glass Door
Hello there, gonna leave you a review quickly! Firstly, my overall impression of your poem, is that it is very well-written! I love the symbolism of a glass door having ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: The Personal Biography of Nobody
Hello there! Gonna leave a review for you. Overall, my impression of this story is that it's a wonderful theme and an excellent idea for a story. You constructed it ...
Oct 13, 2015 -
Re: Good Bye
Hello there! Firstly, I love your wording. It gives your (poem?) a more interesting flow. I'm not sure what you catagorize this, but I feel like it's mainly expressing the ...
Oct 13, 2015 -
Re: No Answer
Hey there! I must say, I love this poem so much! It's very relatable, in fact, I'm facing an issue with a very close family member, that is described perfectly ...
Oct 13, 2015 -
Re: Define Life
I absolutely loved this poem. It's true, to different people life can be defined very differently, and yet behind all these reasons, we may never truly know what life means. ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: Screw money!
Hey there! Gonna review your poem quick :) Overall, I liked it a lot! I feel like it's both relatable and compelling to read. The last stanza, is particularly my ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: The Halloween Genie
Hello there! Decided to leave a review :) Overall, I actually enjoyed reading your story! I thought it was cute and simple, but it effectively kept my attention throughout the ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: Degrading Myself
Hello there, Gonna review this for you quick! Overall, I enjoyed reading this. I felt like I could relate to a lot of what you were saying. I feel like ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: If My Life Were a Novel. . .
I love this poem! Seriously, how you compare your life to different scenarios, is very interesting. The flow and rhyme is consistent and enjoyable to read throughout. I particularly liked ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: Please Don't Go...
Hello there, gonna review this for you quickly. Firstly: the story is very sad, and successfully made me empathize with the narrator. Not sure if this was fiction-based, or true? ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: dying
Hello there! Firstly.. wow. I just have to say, I love this poem! The first stanza in particular grabbed my attention. It was easy to read despite having shorter phrases, ...
Oct 11, 2015
