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Winter257

Winter257

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: Chapter one: The dead city

    Hello there! Just came across this, and decided to review it. So, though it was short, I really like what you're getting at! I think you should make it half ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Wings, Chapter 1

    Hello, gonna leave you a review! Overall, I really enjoyed the start of your story. I've always enjoyed stories like these. I really liked how you gradually started hinting around ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: First Love

    Hello, gonna leave you a review! Overall, I genuinely enjoyed reading this short story. It's hard for me to gain empathy for characters, especially in shorter works, but you successfully ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shadow...

    Okay, gonna leave you a review! :D Firstly, I love what you chose to write about. The idea of your shadow being your lifelong friend, gives me feelings of sadness ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Hello there, gonna leave you a review quickly! Firstly, my overall impression of your poem, is that it is very well-written! I love the symbolism of a glass door having ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Personal Biography of Nobody

    Hello there! Gonna leave a review for you. Overall, my impression of this story is that it's a wonderful theme and an excellent idea for a story. You constructed it ...

    Oct 13, 2015
  • Other » Romantic, General Re: Good Bye

    Hello there! Firstly, I love your wording. It gives your (poem?) a more interesting flow. I'm not sure what you catagorize this, but I feel like it's mainly expressing the ...

    Oct 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: No Answer

    Hey there! I must say, I love this poem so much! It's very relatable, in fact, I'm facing an issue with a very close family member, that is described perfectly ...

    Oct 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Define Life

    I absolutely loved this poem. It's true, to different people life can be defined very differently, and yet behind all these reasons, we may never truly know what life means. ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Screw money!

    Hey there! Gonna review your poem quick :) Overall, I liked it a lot! I feel like it's both relatable and compelling to read. The last stanza, is particularly my ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: The Halloween Genie

    Hello there! Decided to leave a review :) Overall, I actually enjoyed reading your story! I thought it was cute and simple, but it effectively kept my attention throughout the ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Degrading Myself

    Hello there, Gonna review this for you quick! Overall, I enjoyed reading this. I felt like I could relate to a lot of what you were saying. I feel like ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If My Life Were a Novel. . .

    I love this poem! Seriously, how you compare your life to different scenarios, is very interesting. The flow and rhyme is consistent and enjoyable to read throughout. I particularly liked ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Please Don't Go...

    Hello there, gonna review this for you quickly. Firstly: the story is very sad, and successfully made me empathize with the narrator. Not sure if this was fiction-based, or true? ...

    Oct 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dying

    Hello there! Firstly.. wow. I just have to say, I love this poem! The first stanza in particular grabbed my attention. It was easy to read despite having shorter phrases, ...

    Oct 11, 2015


Steps to enlightenment brighten the way, but the steps are steep. Take them one at a time.
— Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice)