Hello! This is my first review so I apologize in advance.
However, your poem is so relate able and so easy to connect with. I love that the most about it. All of the emotions that you have put into the character has really allowed me to visualize and feel what she/he is going through and I love that.
I need a good bye not goodbye.
That line makes the whole poem! It really makes the whole title make sense, and connects it will your real emotion shows. I love it and can totally can relate to that!
My heart physically aches from you absence.
I am not sure if you meant to do that, but I just wanted to bring it to your attention. I know it is easy to make typos
Also, if you wanted to make it more like a poem, I would show a little more form, like a poem. Maybe try to rhyme somethings. It is just a suggestion.
Overall, I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! I would love to read more of your work.
Points: 707
Reviews: 6
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