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Re: Warning Signs.
Hello, came across this, and decided to leave a quick review. Overall, I liked this. I thought it was interesting how a wasp was used as a spirit animal, and ...
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Re: Adam's Pole Dance
Okay, so I read one of your other lyrics, and decided to check out more of your work. And, I will only say that this is a huge change in ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: What Is Left?
Hey there! Gonna leave a review for you quickly! So, I was curious what genre of music would you consider this? Because the entire time I was rapping it in ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: Zero
Hey there, gonna leave you a review. Overall, your poem was very well constructed, in my opinion. Using zero as a comparison to value in more ways than just it's ...
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Re: The Game of Life
Hello, came across this and decided to leave a review! So, my overall opinion of this story, is that it was very very interesting. I almost pictured a matrix scenario ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: Misplaced
Hey there, gonna leave you a review! So, firstly, I love the way you set this poem up. I think it added to the theme with the question and answer ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: A Question Left Unanswered
Well, I decided I'd leave a review quickly! :D I honestly love this poem. It's completely relatable, and despite it being short, it successfully portrays your theme. I don't know ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Unnoticed
Hello there! I really loved this. I felt like I could understand exactly the emotions being portrayed. I really liked the last two lines... While they were sad, they also ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Mirror
Hello there! I saw your description, so I had to check out the poem. Overall, I could really connect with this poem. Anyone who has suffered from, or witnessed depression ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: The Performance
Hello there! Gonna leave you a review quickly. Overall, your poem is quite nice. It easily reflects what it's like to do a performance in front of a crowd. Besides ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Another Father's Day at The Cabin
I liked this poem, quite a bit. I was rather shocked at how it turned on itself. At first I was questioning as to why you listed this as horror! ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: World Wide War-Chapter 1
Hello, gonna review this piece for you quick! Overall, I'm not too sure if this makes much sense to me. I get that you're emphasizing war, but I just don't ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Dear Mother
Hey acm! Saw this, and decided to read it quickly. And I must say, I was not at all dissatisfied. As I may have said before, it's hard for me ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: The Everyday Life of a Shapeshifter
Hello there! Gonna leave you a review quick. Overall, I think your story has a ton of poetential. This chapter is a wonderful start to your story. I love the ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: A Grimace or Two
Hello there! Gonna leave you a quick review. So, I really liked these lyrics! I was imagining this as a rap in my head xD I loved how you worded ...
Oct 15, 2015
