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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: character development

    Hey, there. First off, I'd like to say I really like how you've titled this poem and yet never directly alluded to the title within the body of the poem. ...

    Apr 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey, there! I'm just going to leave a few quick comments, as I don't have a lot of time at the moment. I was mainly drawn in by the title. ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wooden Comb

    Hello! Thought I'd leave a review. This was an interesting poem, and I found it a bit fascinating to try to determine the perspective and the intended meaning. It gives ...

    Jun 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: please do (not)

    Hey, there! This is a great poem, and I enjoyed reading it. Your look into the different stages of life is fascinating. I found it interesting to discover what you ...

    Apr 25, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: :(

    Hey, there! I stopped by to see the content of this poem that was titled just with an emoji. So here are a few thoughts on it. First of all, ...

    Apr 25, 2022
  • Art » Romantic, General Re: Loving You

    Hey, there! It's easy to tell that you have a sentimental goal with this poem. Rather than being a poem on the pain that can come with loving a person, ...

    Mar 23, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night Driving

    Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this poem. It was interesting to read. I like how you take the general mood of nighttime and describe it. It definitely gives the impression ...

    Mar 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Void

    Hey, there! This is a well-written poem, and I enjoyed reading it. One of the first things I appreciated was the clean, organized structure and consistency with the stanzas. You ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Auditory Processing Disorder

    Hey, there! I was intrigued to see this, and I appreciate that you've expressed the feelings connected with APD. My sister has an unofficial diagnosis for APD, so I am ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Girl on the wire

    Hey, there! This poem was easy to read and intriguing in the way that it makes the reader think about the meaning. I feel like there could be several ways ...

    Mar 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: For my Grandfather

    Hey there! This is a very sentimental piece, and I feel as though you've shared a personal bit of your heart of your own experience here. I found as I ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: i told him

    Greetings! This is a nice poem, and it was enjoyable to read. I think it's pretty relatable, the way you've given us a glimpse into the mind of a narrator ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Think Me a Woman

    Hey, there. This was a great read, and I appreciate how you've taken on such a serious subject. The way you portray the indignation felt from the victim's side of ...

    Jan 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: City Lights

    Hey there! Lovely poem, and excellent idea for a subject! I like how you've given us a glimpse of the scene you're describing as though it is the narrator's first ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Admission of the Whimsical

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you bring the reader's attention to one who claims to be boring. Starting out by saying, "I'm boring" has an ...

    Nov 23, 2021


The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest