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Re: character development
Hey, there. First off, I'd like to say I really like how you've titled this poem and yet never directly alluded to the title within the body of the poem. ...
Apr 19, 2023 -
Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey, there! I'm just going to leave a few quick comments, as I don't have a lot of time at the moment. I was mainly drawn in by the title. ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: Wooden Comb
Hello! Thought I'd leave a review. This was an interesting poem, and I found it a bit fascinating to try to determine the perspective and the intended meaning. It gives ...
Jun 9, 2022 -
Re: please do (not)
Hey, there! This is a great poem, and I enjoyed reading it. Your look into the different stages of life is fascinating. I found it interesting to discover what you ...
Apr 25, 2022 -
Re: :(
Hey, there! I stopped by to see the content of this poem that was titled just with an emoji. So here are a few thoughts on it. First of all, ...
Apr 25, 2022 -
Re: Loving You
Hey, there! It's easy to tell that you have a sentimental goal with this poem. Rather than being a poem on the pain that can come with loving a person, ...
Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: Night Driving
Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this poem. It was interesting to read. I like how you take the general mood of nighttime and describe it. It definitely gives the impression ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Void
Hey, there! This is a well-written poem, and I enjoyed reading it. One of the first things I appreciated was the clean, organized structure and consistency with the stanzas. You ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: Auditory Processing Disorder
Hey, there! I was intrigued to see this, and I appreciate that you've expressed the feelings connected with APD. My sister has an unofficial diagnosis for APD, so I am ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: Girl on the wire
Hey, there! This poem was easy to read and intriguing in the way that it makes the reader think about the meaning. I feel like there could be several ways ...
Mar 1, 2022 -
Re: For my Grandfather
Hey there! This is a very sentimental piece, and I feel as though you've shared a personal bit of your heart of your own experience here. I found as I ...
Feb 15, 2022 -
Re: i told him
Greetings! This is a nice poem, and it was enjoyable to read. I think it's pretty relatable, the way you've given us a glimpse into the mind of a narrator ...
Feb 15, 2022 -
Re: You Think Me a Woman
Hey, there. This was a great read, and I appreciate how you've taken on such a serious subject. The way you portray the indignation felt from the victim's side of ...
Jan 25, 2022 -
Re: City Lights
Hey there! Lovely poem, and excellent idea for a subject! I like how you've given us a glimpse of the scene you're describing as though it is the narrator's first ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Admission of the Whimsical
Hey there! I enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you bring the reader's attention to one who claims to be boring. Starting out by saying, "I'm boring" has an ...
Nov 23, 2021
