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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wooden Comb

    Hello! Thought I'd leave a review. This was an interesting poem, and I found it a bit fascinating to try to determine the perspective and the intended meaning. It gives ...

    Jun 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: please do (not)

    Hey, there! This is a great poem, and I enjoyed reading it. Your look into the different stages of life is fascinating. I found it interesting to discover what you ...

    Apr 25, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: :(

    Hey, there! I stopped by to see the content of this poem that was titled just with an emoji. So here are a few thoughts on it. First of all, ...

    Apr 25, 2022
  • Art » Romantic, General Re: Loving You

    Hey, there! It's easy to tell that you have a sentimental goal with this poem. Rather than being a poem on the pain that can come with loving a person, ...

    Mar 23, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Night Driving

    Hey, there! Thanks for sharing this poem. It was interesting to read. I like how you take the general mood of nighttime and describe it. It definitely gives the impression ...

    Mar 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Void

    Hey, there! This is a well-written poem, and I enjoyed reading it. One of the first things I appreciated was the clean, organized structure and consistency with the stanzas. You ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Auditory Processing Disorder

    Hey, there! I was intrigued to see this, and I appreciate that you've expressed the feelings connected with APD. My sister has an unofficial diagnosis for APD, so I am ...

    Mar 2, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Girl on the wire

    Hey, there! This poem was easy to read and intriguing in the way that it makes the reader think about the meaning. I feel like there could be several ways ...

    Mar 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: For my Grandfather

    Hey there! This is a very sentimental piece, and I feel as though you've shared a personal bit of your heart of your own experience here. I found as I ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: i told him

    Greetings! This is a nice poem, and it was enjoyable to read. I think it's pretty relatable, the way you've given us a glimpse into the mind of a narrator ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Think Me a Woman

    Hey, there. This was a great read, and I appreciate how you've taken on such a serious subject. The way you portray the indignation felt from the victim's side of ...

    Jan 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: City Lights

    Hey there! Lovely poem, and excellent idea for a subject! I like how you've given us a glimpse of the scene you're describing as though it is the narrator's first ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Admission of the Whimsical

    Hey there! I enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you bring the reader's attention to one who claims to be boring. Starting out by saying, "I'm boring" has an ...

    Nov 23, 2021
  • Art » General, Technology Re: hot Chocolate

    Hey there! I was interested to read this since I love hot chocolate. So my first impression obviously started with the lovely image you included. It looks so tasty and ...

    Nov 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A List of Things I Cannot Stand

    Hey, there! I like how you numbered each item in this poem. It gives it a sense of structure by theme and helps keep it moving. You have taken a ...

    Oct 26, 2021


I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees.
— Pablo Neruda