WinnyWriter

Hey, there. Nice piece. You've done well illustrating the narrator's pain. The first paragraph is cool in that it mentions feeling, hearing, tasting, smelling - however, it seemed slightly incomplete ...

Awesome writing, once again! This chapter really pulled me into the story. Wow. It's amazing. The way you show us the backstory and yet refrain from giving the whole explanation ...

Hey, there. This story makes a really good point that many of us could definitely afford to ponder. I'm glad you've taken on the task of illustrating that point. I ...

Hi! I love first chapters. Glad to see this out. It seems to be the start of a cute and exciting story. Also, I like how you've put college in ...

Hey, there! I'm glad to see this posted. I love the turn you've taken here. You left us feeling so hopeless with your cliffhanger ending where Ala turns down her ...

Hello! This is a cute poem, and reading it made me feel happy. It almost sounds like it could be a song. I really like the concept of it. Some ...

Hey, there! Beautiful writing. Your talent and creativity give this poem a nice feel. I really liked how you employed the repetition of: "All those broken promises, all those dirty ...

Hey, there! This was a fun poem to read. Nothing too serious exerts the reader's brain while taking in the beauty of this creative work, which is nice for a ...

Beautiful! This palindrome shows an admirable talent. It takes a lot of concentrated, organized thinking, and not anyone could pull it off this well. Great job. This work talks about ...

Hey, fellow writer! You've started off on a cool work of writing. I am fascinated by it already. I like how you describe people, but you don't over-describe. One good ...

Hey! Your work is well-written. It gives the reader something to ponder. I don't personally watch TV, but still, I am aware of how the stream of evil can hammer ...

Hello! This is a nice poem. I noticed you focused on each autumn month and listed specific characteristics. That gives it a nice structure and organization. It's also perfect for ...

Hey! You've got a cool story started. Giving us this glimpse into the beginning of the main character's life is a fascinating way to start. Usually stories just drop us ...

Hello! Great change of paths here! I'm still anxious to hear of Miranda finding out what "deal" Hayden got involved in, but in the meantime, this change of scenery gives ...

This is deep, and I love the structure. It's a beautiful poem about love, and in some respects, I can relate quite well. I really admire how you reinforce the ...