abachmann here!!
Wow this is really cool. I think what you did here is very smart. I think what your meaning here is how you feel that your story is alive and breathing. My favorite part of your story is the end, where you say
“Sit back, frown at the Screen like it’s a
Broken Thing
Because the Story
Is
Over”
I love that!!!
I have one tiny nitpick...
You added a lot of capital letters on the middle of sentences. Maybe this is intentional, maybe not!!
Other then that, I love this! It perfectly portrays being a author!! Amazing job!!
-abachmann
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