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Re: Jack's Memory
Hey, there! This is a nice little piece, and so exciting! Considering your limitation to a certain number of words, it's really imaginative and captivating. The story draws the reader ...
Jan 9, 2020 -
Re: Once There Was Beauty
Hey, there. I found this poem while looking through your portfolio. This is a nice work that shows your love for the earth and your passion for protecting life and ...
Jan 9, 2020 -
Re: Alternate Reality: The Other Girl
Hey, there! This short story is very meaningful. It is not super obvious from the outset, but as I read it, I became aware that it was depicting something deeper. ...
Jan 8, 2020 -
Re: It Doesn't Feel Like Christmas
Hey, there. This is a cool little historical fiction short story. I like how you make it feel real by giving a glimpse of insight into the men's lives and ...
Dec 23, 2019 -
Re: You're Too Young
Hey, there! This is a really cute script. The story is easy to follow, and yet the underlying points are sorta funny (in a good way). :) I love how ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: Late Shift
Hey! I was pulled in by this story. It is fascinating, and so far, I like it. The unique setting and unusual opening scene are intriguing. You stepped right into ...
Dec 13, 2019 -
Re: Crazy Young Hearts
Hey, there. You've done well with this work in covering the process of what's happening here. Lots of poetry just focuses on feelings and emotions, and while that is perfectly ...
Dec 12, 2019 -
Re: Dear Mom
This is a really sweet poem. It's nice to see a work addressed to one's mother. I can see that the narrator loves his/her mother, and the mother returns the ...
Dec 12, 2019 -
Re: Go a Head and Kill Me
Hey, there. This definitely took an unexpected twist. Not bad. You definitely make the reader curious and arouse an interest in what in the world is going on. I noticed ...
Dec 12, 2019 -
Re: Snail mail
Hello, fellow writer! This poem is super interesting! Your idea is genius, and I love the way it's dark and yet not dark, if you know what I mean. It ...
Dec 11, 2019 -
Re: Dear Friend
Awww! This is super sweet! You should DEFINITELY give it to your friend!!! It will be something treasured between you forever. That being said, this is a really precious piece. ...
Dec 11, 2019 -
Re: My Secret Lifeline
Hey, there! Nice poem! It is well-written, and the rhyme scheme is consistent. I realize that non-rhyming poetry is popular, but I always like to see a good rhyming poem. ...
Dec 11, 2019 -
Re: The Rose
Hey, there. This is a very interesting work, and definitely a unique perspective. Your creativity blossoms all over this piece. (The pun wasn't necessarily intended, but, hey... ;) ) You've ...
Dec 11, 2019 -
Re: Short Hair
Hey, there. I like this poem. It is thought-provoking on a subject that I feel often goes silent, yet we all wish would be addressed. Sometimes people will tell us ...
Dec 9, 2019 -
Re: Cat and Boy
Hello! This is a unique and interesting work! It's fascinating because it is different. I really like how you've shown the cat attitude. Like, that is totally what probably goes ...
Dec 6, 2019
