WaterVyper

Hi Serendipity! Sorry I took so long to get to this one. Well, I can say that this was almost perfect. The theme was good, and the ending line was ...

Okay boltage, time for a bit of critique. There are a lot of errors here, so I don't think I'll try pointing them all out. You have some issues with ...

Okay, your song here, it's kind of extreme. I'm no that good with lyrics, but they're similar to poems. I have to say at the beginning that this conveys strong ...

I love the Percy Jackson books. They have a countdown till the release of the last book. As of right now, it is about 50 days, and 15 hours till ...

This was short, and sweet. The length of this poem was a small issue though. This could be expanded a little bit, but it would feel like it would drag ...

This was an awesome script. I am already seeing this being turned into a full length script and movie; it's just awesome like that. Script Frenzy is extremely tempting, though ...

Hello there, and I must say that it's an honor to be able to reviwe this poem. It was beautiful, as Knightly mentioned. The words just flow into place, the ...

Hi, sorry I couldn't get to it sooner. Now, for your review. Concentrate, he thought, dumping yet another bucket of water overboard, half of it splashing either[b] onto the boat ...

Well, I have to say that this was lacking a bit in the impact department, as Forever mentioned. It needs a bit more hook at the beginning, but anyway... I ...

Hi telle, and I'll be your reviewer for today. You have a lack of capitalization in this poem, which was the first thing I noticed. Capitalizing the first word in ...

This is a very good piece, lilchoma! I like the way you wrote this; the repetition just flows into the poem. However, a few things that I feel remove from ...

This was kind of creepy, but I like it for some morbid reason. The whole thing sounded so innocent, yet scary at the same time. I love it. There are ...

Meep = Genius! I swear, this was the most brilliant piece of Twilight and Harry Potter fanfiction (or something like that) that I have ever read! You had me laughing ...

This was such a sweet story, anti-pop! I love the voice you used for this. It instantly made me want to huggle Lacey. Your voice was so strong, yet light ...

This was a very good poem. It was short, and seemed to call out to me. However, your use of punctuation here is erratic, to say the least. In some ...