ACT I
SCENE I
A phone rings
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: YWS SCRIPTS PRESENTS...
The phone continues ringing.
TEXT: A SPEW PRODUCTION...
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EXT. SKYSCRAPER - DAY
GRIF is relaxing on a chaise lounge on the roof. He is wearing green armor. He picks up the phone.
GRIF: Grif here.
PHONE: Initiate CODE GREEN Protocols. Sending coordinates now.
GRIF: I'm on my way.
GRIF gets up and RUNS forward, jumping off the edge of the skyscraper.
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: AS DARKNESS APPROACHES...
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INT - CAR - DAY
TEAGUE is waiting at a red light, tapping her fingers on the steering wheel impatiently.
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: A HERO WILL ARRIVE...
CUT BACK
GRIF arrives, landing on a car next to TEAGUE. The car is crushed, but his green armor isn't scratched.
GRIF: Member 2194, what is your emergency?
TEAGUE: Uh... why did you do that?
GRIF: Do what?
TEAGUE: Wreck the car.
GRIF: What car?
TEAGUE: Exactly...
GRIF: What's-
TEAGUE: Wait, hold on, I need a coat. It's eighty degrees in here.
GRIF looks around. Smoke is billowing out of the car he landed on and the cars behind TEAGUE are honking their horns. The light has turned green.
GRIF: Why did you call me over here again?
Ninjas come.
GRIF: Not again...
BLACK CAT SACHIKO arrives.
BCS: Follow me...
Random YWS members faces flash across the screen
Cue a random song from your music player.
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: WHEN A MEMBER GOES MISSING...
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EXT. COURTYARD - DAY.
Members are carrying signs saying "Where is Snoink?"
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: IT IS UP TO SPEW TO FIND THEM...
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INT. OFFICE - DAY.
WIGGY: But I thought SPEW didn't exist!
GRIF: They don't.
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: THE SEARCH IS ON!
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INT. WAREHOUSE
Nate laughs maniacally as monkeys sling poo at the crate GRIF is hiding behind.
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BLACK SCREEN
TEXT: SPEW ADVENTURES: THE SEARCH FOR SNOINK. COMING TO A FORUM NEAR YOU. This story is not yet rated...
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Epic awesomesauce dude.
Epic awesomesauce...
Grif, the thing is, that would actually be a pretty good trailer! I almost want to see the movie now- okay, scratch that, I do want to see the movie! Haha... Nate should really look into giving it some funding -reckon it would be a box office hit!
Epic win, m'dear. Epic win.
-Stella.
Hahahahahahahaahaa.
...HA!
Win. Pure win. *is honored*
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Oh, excuse me. I couldn't write anything, because I couldn't see, because my eyes were closed, because I was imagining the trailer. I can just see it before me. Ha, that's funny, my eyes aren't even closed now. But I can still see it.
...Anyway. This was the total opposite of epic fail. And I don't mean that it's unepic fail. Well, you know what I mean.
Right?
You must. Because this was fantastical.
For some reason, Nate makes the perfect evil mastermind. I think he kind of is, already.
That's a good thing.
Demeter
xxx
DO NOT ENCOURAGE
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Says all. xD
I may be a wimp when it comes to cold, but everyone else is a wimp when it comes to the heat I deal with every summer.
DO NOT MOCK
*not impressed*
Teague
x
Winwinwinwinwin. xD
I'm serious, if you don't make this a full-length script, Something Bad will happen. It's an omen, Grif.
I laughed out loud at that part! Teague needs to live on like... Jupiter. xD
I hope you actually make a film. That would be so amazing!
This was an awesome script. I am already seeing this being turned into a full length script and movie; it's just awesome like that. Script Frenzy is extremely tempting, though I have something planned out already.
Well, awesome work. I couldn't find any mistakes with this one. *pouts* Ah well. Thumbs up and a gold star from me!
Don't think that's anyone's line, but in a rare moment of catching an error, I'll point out the apostrophe.
haha, funny. Love it. the car bit with Teague was brilliant.
Grif, awesome! You should totally round up a few members who are good at animations/production and have this trailer produced.
xD I could totally see this being made into a movie...
Epic win!
June
XD Ah but where is the kitten eating? How can there be a SPEW trailer without kitten eating and CCF crushing?
Other than that, epic win <3
Win.
Awesome. Maybe a bit more meat between the trailer parts. When you going to write the movie?
Edited the name.
Epic win.
Although, it is spelled Black Cat Sachiko, I think.
Pretty darn awesome trailer, once I got over the caps. Hehe.
Love,
Music.
Hey Grif!
I'll just point out two bloopers I spotted in your trailer.
1) The line "Ninja's come.", I believe you forgot to indicate that is Teague's line?
2) I think its spelt Black Cat Sachiko?
~Meep(: