WWombat

cool hero stuff like spiderman and ubermensch manny wooly mammoth ting. anyway i like ur poem coz of da way u dismantle heroes n make da villain da hero. par ...

oooh more weird formatting. its all da rage 2day. i like da butterflies but y r day invisible? meanwhile i like the way u talk about smells wonderful n 2ho's ...

George luvs Luna, his hip hop huuny! Dat sweet. Dat nasty, though, 4 sum reeson. Can't xplane y. It's sad, real sad, but your username spoilz it. Den again, Stevey ...

Rerrreee! WWombat here! Diz a good poem and u no it, fam. First of all, I am well impressed with your use of dat slash ting on da lines. It ...

Hello there. I am BirthdayHangman, here to review your poem. I liked this one. I think that your themes were well chosen and, for a second poem, it was a ...

Why do I have to scroll to read it all? Wouldn't it have been easier to post in the normal format? I can tell this is your first work because ...

This is too long. I want it to be shorter because I don't understand what you are talking about. Why is 4:49 bolded? Why are you so negative? I think ...

The last time I checked, a hero was someone to look up to, much like Spiderman. However you have taken it slightly out of context. To me a hero is ...

According to my calculator, 300ft2 = 90,000. I don't know what that has to do with your poem, but regardless I like this. I like how cold it is. It's ...

I like trees, but by wind, do you mean flatulence? I was a bit confused about this. The length of your stanzas are irregular, which makes me rather concerned. This ...

Whoever "she" is must look good, because this poem is very good. It's like an ice cream. I like your use of metaphors as a way to symbolise isolation and ...

What has berry yoghurt got to do with freedom? I mean, sure, I liked the poem, but I did not understand the metaphor. You need to clarify this because I ...

This is a good effort. I find it highly confessional and well structured. You have replaced the cherry on top with the Spanish Armada. I relate to this struggle; it ...

I like this a lot. I think you could improve by not adding dashes- it confuses me. I would also love to see you expand your scope through relating back ...