Vivian

You get a standing ovation for a continuous, melodious flow and the rhyming scheme.

Okay I'll do that, thanks for your review.

Thanks, I meant what have we done to be called great, like Alexander the Great. I'll change the bianess.

I think it makes sense.

Saddest students ever, tell your sister this is a great story.

If this is true I'm sorry, but the poem is great.

It's lovely Hassanfs. It gives the feeling of one of those romantic beach scenes in the movies and all you hear is the tide. Like saying this is the push ...

Absolutely nothing. It's sweet, I don't think there's anything you should change. But to be honest, my first thought at reading the title were "Spidey sense are tingling" or even ...

Thanks. I'll fix those things, especially that typo.

Hot, but I'm not good with country music but your idea is just great. One little error I saw was "Pop music would a thing of the past" I think ...

A lion or a giraffe. I don't know what a vertebrate is. :I

Thanks, this story made me think of like 90's shows with little kid adventures like in Rugrats.

So exactly how old is John?

So, what inspired this, do you remember?

You deserve international credit for this, it's so inspiring and beautiful. Especially loved the title ;). It's the dream.