Vivian

Nice, that's a great way to get over an ex, write a poem and slam him or her. Okay, nitpick time. I understand you were trying to make every line ...

That's so sweet. Nitpick time. 1. "...when they are recognize for a short amount of time." I think that should be recognized. 2. "I often times and the quiet one ...

Okay, I think I like your idea, but each line sounds discordant. Like it is the ramblings of the crazy old drunkard on the corner and somehow makes a background ...

Aw, that's great. Okay, I was expecting the narrator to actually commit suicide so I am glad he/she has made a resolution to stay alive or has just found freedom ...

I was a tree once, and trees lives are double edged swords. They are magnificent, tall and strong and if they're lucky can live forever. But sadly, like you stated ...

Hey there, Viv here. Okay, great horror story, was completely expecting that ending. So, here's my to do list for ya. 1. "Surely there were books in the our house ...

Wow Ken, it's a speechless reaction but I'm still going to try my best and review. Firstly, welcome to the website, hope you love it here as much as the ...

Well this is probably the saddest thing to happen when you die. I mean we spend our whole lives trying to make the biggest impression on the world so it ...

How, or should I ask you to elaborate? Viv here. As always Secrete your poems are fantastic and as my friend Sarah would say, angsty. Thanks for the vocab word, ...

And yet they're always telling us to grow up. I love this poem and can't find anything wrong with it, so sorry if this isn't a proper review if it ...

Smartest idea I've ever heard. Secondly, welcome to the sight and great poem. I've always seen roses as the most conceited flowers who are always begging to be noticed, and ...

Hey C.C, firstly, welcome to the website. Hope your enjoying it so far. Now on to the review. The first line "dastards", I think you meant "bastards", if not, that's ...

hey Viv here. First off great poem. I'm going to just list the mistakes as I saw them then give the other stuff. One, all I's need to be capitalized. ...

Hey Fortis, great poem. There's just one typo I see, the second to last line. "Come up from that from that endless pit, and scale the rocky wall." That is ...

Despite this being a horror story I still find it somewhat sweet. That last part with the kiss. It's good, I feel it can be turned into something more. You ...