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Re: carson: an "epic" saga of teenage hormones, weirdness, and general whining.
This is Kaos here for a review! I'm going to just leave small notes or thoughts on each individual stanza instead of giving it all one big attention. act I: ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Stone in the Forest
This is Kaos here for a review! Stalk, blade, and stem rise in green unison. Brown bark, dark and heavy clings to every trunk. The leafy peat ground mottled by ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Revelation
This is Kaos here for a short review as there isn't much content to go off of, so let's begin. Simple poems are okay, and I have no problem with ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Across
This is Kaos here for a short review because there isn't much content to go off of, but let's begin! The rhyming in the poem was inconsistent as in some ...
Sep 4, 2016 -
Re: Courage Without Strength
This is Kaos here for a review. This poem to me felt incredibly general. Or it used words that are umbrellas for other words and never explained what the view ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: S.H.
This is Kaos here for a review. I felt like this poem was incredibly weak, comparing it a bit to other stuff you've written. The repetitiveness just bogs the imagery ...
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: My Dearest Friend
This is Kaos here for a review on Review Day. Going to start off easy with that I felt it was unnecessary to have the "Dearest Friend" at both the ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: My Broken Boy
This is Kaos here for a review. I felt like this poem was really weak in the way that it used a lot of stuff that I've heard a million ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Mom
This is Kaos here for a review! Mom, My first best friend, My caretaker, My one and only mother, This can be assumed with a different word choice and I ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Numb
This is Kaos here for a review! I didn't really feel like this poem conveyed the emotion of being numb, first off. It used a lot of metaphors or imagery ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Northeast: Chapter 2 [Original Draft, Read at Your Own Risk]
This is Kaos here for a review on Review Day! Fast as I could, I mounted Blitz and galloped all the way home, got a few things - my flashlight/extra ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Before a great big bomb destroys the Western Coast of the United States
KutieKoala here for a review! You said this was a one stanza poem but instead it has two stanzas which was a lie. But moving on from that, I like ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Colors of Budapest - Chapter 1
This is Kaos here for a review! He opened his arms, closed his eyes and smiled as he whirled around. He danced in harmony with the rhythmic sound of the ...
Jul 24, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book Two~Frozen Past Chapter 17
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I liked the ending and how soft it was but I also liked how it started up a next book. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book one ~ Into the Mists Chapter 18
This is Yams here for a review on Review Day! I liked this ending better than the ending to the other one. It had more stuff happening than the other ...
Jun 26, 2016