Virgil

This is Kaos here for a review. The first thing I noticed about this poem is the amount of punctuation marks you use along with ellipses and overall I think ...

This is Kaos here for a review. A small note before I get into this is that you don't have stanzas in this poem which I don't know if this ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So from what we kind of discussed before that you sort of have a problem with length and most of the problems are ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Lo, the sun has set once more. A reminder, our paths are not always clear. The dark is shrewd and it clouds your ...

This is Kaos here for a review! My main problem with this poem is that it was really basic all around. There aren't /any/ details here that go into more ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I know that you are scared but dear child don't you know, that the darkness is your one true friend. I found this ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first stanza here didn't really make sense to me and needed more clarity. It also didn't really relate to the rest of ...

I best described the feeling I had as that of an innocent young man waiting for his execution. It wasn’t butterflies filling my stomach, but the the heavy metal scale ...

This is Kaos here for a review! A small note before I actually start the poem is that it doesn't have stanzas and I'm kind of assuming that there was ...

This is Kaos here for a review. I bet twelve chips on the bubble getting bigger three on the dog running into the road and fourteen on never meeting you, ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I don't know if you cared Did you are at all? I think you meant "care" instead of "are" in the second line. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Wasn’t it just night outside? I can feel the sun. Somehow I find myself again splayed on the couch, SVU still muted on ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I liked the concept of this flash fiction but for me it didn't really come full circle. It kind of felt as if ...

This is Kaos here for a review. So this is a rather controversial topic that you chose, and I was wondering why you chose this for what you wanted to ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Her tender chanty whispers silent now, This first line honestly felt a little wordy to me and I think that maybe it could ...