Hi LoyalDay! BlueRoses here to give you a review on this "Dark Changes" writing.
Constructive comments first:
I suggest keeping your stanza length the same. It eliminates any confusion for the reader as he or she takes into consideration the writing style used in this poem. You start with a four-line stanza, then a five-line stanza with another five-line following, ending with a six-line stanza. (I've probably said "stanza" too much, haven't I? woops!)
I really love this poem! It really brings out the hidden parts of me.. thank you for posting this. I love how you portray an innocent, young child that doesn't know pain or monsters or the true person one becomes when in darkness. It's amazing.
your friend,
BlueRoses
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