Hello.
Props to you for an opinion piece. It can be pretty hard to get those out there.
My main comment with this is how generic it is. Good message, important message, something I've heard a lot before. It's the basics of the water conservation argument, but it's not much more than that.
Reach beyond the stuff on the surface. What is something concrete we can hold onto? Maybe add some contrast— what is dryness like? The agony of not having water could make this piece more vivid, because right now there's a lack of tension. There's a lack of reason to read, to really believe what being said.
The formatting is on the basic side, as well. There's nothing wrong with punctuation at the end of every sentence, but it's not mandatory for poetry. This article goes into more detail about how to punctuate poetry, and I'd suggest looking at it for this piece to mix it up. It would help the feelings overall, that everything had a purpose.
All in all, this is short and sweet but fluffy and forgettable. Reach beyond the basics about the necessity of water to give readers something they can sink their teeth into. Use the first thoughts as a base, but keep going deeper and deeper into them until you get something that has your voice to it.
Hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions or comments.
~Rosey
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