Hello there, @RedMoon! It's Vilnius, here to review your work.
You've used excellent imagery to describe an era of war, death, and bloodshed during times of strife. I like how you've specified that this is a time for "iron, bronze, and steel," giving this poem a medieval feel. I think that by describing the men as "clothed in purple and scarlet," you've emphasized that nobles and royals are in this particular fray, and hw awful the fighting is.
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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